Xards

could you write a warhammer 40k story plz from the pespective of a humane civilien to space marine (if you do plz dont use one of the normal chapters, use some like the last loyalist war groups of theiron warriors ). i realy liked your star wars story, it was a great read and i reread it often. srry for spelling mistakes englisch is not my motherlanguage.

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will u comtimue this story ?

the names are partly wrong and i can not follow the story , because of wrong translation or spelling . the start was great but it got bad after chapter 17 .

it is a greagte chapter and i hope zou can hold on to this quallity until the last chapter.

it´s a great worke thx for writing it, could you write a wow story about a paladin too plz i love the class but i can not find anny storys withe a paladin mc . And again great worke you are doing i love ypur story.

plz use the japanes names or most of the readers will not know which charecter you mean

Great so far , but could you use the original names plz because i dont know somtimes which charecter you mean.

plz only stargate and if possible late starwars