Virtuous_Vanity

When will Sirin awaken? The omake at the end has made me impatient wwww. I wonder how she would react to their new circumstances though, and hopefully would have a happier ending compared to canon.

Kiana came off really desperate in this chapter...

wwwww. As expected of the comment section! All cultured!

Welcome to WN, Vain! Hope you have a good time! Anyway, here's the review- Writing Quality - 5* - Vain's writing is one of the most fun and understandable that I've had experience of. And, as expected of him, this story is simply amazing. For a story that only has little chapters compared to other stories in here, I daresay the quality of it is simply superb. After all, I prefer quality over quantity. Story Development - 5* - It's not rushed nor is it slow. The pacing is just... that. Something you can follow and won't make you lose. The story is fleshed out too with little to no boring scenes as almost everything inside this is entertaining! Character Design - 5* - This is why I like Vain's works. He makes the character so fleshed out that you know and realize every person has their own set of unique perks that makes them different from other people. It's what led me to his other stories, and one that I certainly do not regret doing so. Updating Stability - 5* - Again, superb. For a writer that is updating multiple stories, the quality never drops and stay consistent. I only hope that Vain isn't pushing himself that hard. World Background - 5* - Same as character design, the world background is fleshed out too. Vain describes the world that makes it easy to understand so you can visualise it more clearly. ... This has been quite a long one, but good luck here Vain! Calyx out.

OMAKE - In Another World of Crossover Anime?! -Alternative Timeline- Kazuma Hyoudou woke up with a head-splitting headache. (O/N: I know, real original) An unfamiliar ceiling greeted him when he opened his eyes. And well, that woke up him, quickly. 'Did I drink too much last night and slept in someone's place? No, no wait, I don't even drink!' Kazuma didn't really interact with anyone for the last few months since the quarantine, only living from leeching off from his parent's, and really, he was an introvert so it was impossible for him to drink with someone. 'What happened last night..?' Fighting the headache from trying to remember, Kazuma remembered bits and pieces of what happened before. Of the feeling of saltiness when he pulled in Gacha. Of being so salty that he went outside - an impossibility - to get some fresh air so he could forget the painful sensation of pulling common gears. Of the beautiful breeze. -And the sudden truck that appeared and hit him. 'Isekai? No, no... this is impossible, right? Maybe I just woke up in someone's place? Maybe someone saved me?' Frantically searching the area of the empty room beside the bed, Kazuma soon found a simple piece of paper lying innocently on the way to the door of the room. Desperate and more than a little scared, Kazuma quickly picked up the paper and read through it. [ Hey kid, sorry about the truck that hit you. I was just testing some things. In exchange for killing you, I reincarnated you in a fictional world- an anime one to be specific, and a crossover of three franchise if I recall correctly. Now, I don't want to be spoiling things... so bye bye kiddo! **. I give you some extra stuff to survive the world ] Kazuma only had one response. "No... no... no! What about my games? What about the saltiness that I've persevere to get the character that I wanted? What about the holy pulls that I got?!" Yes. Kazuma had a mental breakdown from not having his gacha. And yes, he was that addicted. "Damn.. it!" Kazuma just collapsed on the floor with clenched hands and looking at the ceiling as if it was his last moments. "R.O.B or whatever you are... I promise that I will make you pay for what you have done! No one will get away from taking the gacha from me!" With the determination of a protagonist fighting the last boss, Kazuma swore an oath. -x-X-x Alexander Gremory just let out a huff to constrain his laughter when he read the thoughts that were passing through his test subject's head. "Now that's real original right there." "Papa~! Mama called for you!" "Ah, right right, let's go to your Mama now, is that okay Alice?" Alex asked while patting his daughter's head with a smile. Alice's response was a bright smile that lightened up the room. "Yes!" And, that is how the journey of Kazuma Hyoudou began.

I know. Author already showed that before, but for fùcks sake. They are literally the strongest beings in their multiverse so why do they need to recruit Athena? If Bryl needs guards then she literally has her Valkyries behind her and many beings that would grovel on their feet just to protect her so they could satisfy Issei. It feels so forced and just happened because another girl needs to be introduced. And, back to Issei... You can be unreasonable but you don't have to be a fuçking asshole to someone you literally threatened to serve your wife because you somehow don't have thousands of fùcking servants from other worlds.

The struggle of the first lover is always not really shown for reasons such as "MC has too much stamina", "MC is cool. Must havr many romance" or "Girl confesses and MC suddenly has romantic feelings for her". Emi's struggle shows the normal thought process of a women who just got together in a relationship that being threatened by another female. That's why even though this will be frustrating at first, it will be really refreshing compared to other first where the first girl suddenly accepts their love having another woman while they can't screw other men beside him. Patriarchal, I tell you. But what can I do? Most readers are power wankers who want to maśturbate over a text of men dominating women because they are "alpha". I've rant long enough lol. Anyway, I just wanna say, keep going author. It's a new take on a harem situation in web novel. Good job!

Don't need*

...Are you somehow breaking your character and gaining decency out of nowhere? What the ****? You bought her for the sole purpose of having a **** toy. You don't need to treat her nice. That was your goal, wasn't it? To have tons of ****toys you could **** everywhere you fucking want. Why are you feeling apologetic? Because you were caught? What?

Resonance with Steel (Swords)