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You don’t need to pay attention to the haters. No matter what you do, there will always be someone who disagrees with you. Since you don’t have a Patreon, I assume this is a passion project rather than a monetary one—and it shows in how quickly you’ve been putting out high-quality chapters. 605K views, 51 reviews, and a 4.7-star rating on a 12-day-old fanfic from a new author is massively impressive. Take pride in that!
I'll check it out .Thx for the recommendation.
One of the best MCU/Ben 10 stories on Webnovel, with solid English that deserves no less than five stars. The only downside is that all the conversations feel overly serious, regardless of context, often overanalyzing things (maybe to make the MC seem smart). While this works well in some scenes, it loses its appeal when it happens in every single one. I'd appreciate some simple slice-of-life moments—he's 16, so maybe send him to school or something! XD There's just a bit too much action.
who's that ??
I really like the changes you made here! A transmigrator who actually makes ripples instead of just being a companion to the story is a refreshing take. Friendly Loki is still dangerous since he hasn’t gone through the full character development he did in the series—or has he seen more than just a glimpse of it? Can’t wait to read more! And thanks for the chapter!
I have to say, I'm not very satisfied with this chapter. I understand not wanting the MC to be overpowered and just walk over every threat, as well as giving other characters their moments in the spotlight. But this, mate… For example, you could have had him evacuate civilians while Thor deals with the Destroyer—so he doesn’t steal his thunder (pun intended). He could have punched the Destroyer away from civilians and then let Thor do his thing. Having him get his ass handed to him by the Destroyer—who got one-tapped by Thor in the original, despite Thor being matched in strength by the Hulk, whom the MC fought equally in earlier chapters—just doesn’t seem logical. Apart from this, I really like your fanfic and hope you don’t fall into the "drama for drama’s sake" trap like many others do.
whats a comically neutral face ?? something like this ?
why do you keep bringing the hyugas .the strongest hyuuga in the Naruto verse is hiashi who's an elite jonin at best. rasa is an S class ninja even with his shameful assassination ,he can courbe stomp the hyuugas combined.