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  • Free20play
    Free20play16 minutes ago
    回復 CarefeeDaoist

    i didn’t even bother reading this story moment i noticed the author made the mc a kryptonian but still tried forcing him into mark the viltrumlites family/life. like doing that just kinda makes mc being kryptonian moot and meaningless. but yeah i perfectly understand you. i see the same thing play out in marvel fics where the mc is a bruiser/beater and author still forces him or her to go to kamar taj and learn magic under the ancient one. same thing with alot of dbz x marvel/dc fics. readers just wana see a saiyan go ham yet 90% of the authors don’t understand this and have to go super convoluted backgrounds or mixing up of bloodlines. its telling when one of the best dbz x dc/comic fics keeps the mc as a pure saiyan no hybrid experimental mutt of lex luthor and the lights&project cadmus works. other times they don’t even bother using logic n have a fusion of universes which brings its own set of problems like balancing both settings cosmologies with each other. very simple mistakes that could’ve been avoided if the author didn’t create them in the first place.

  • Free20play
    Free20play21 hours ago
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    my opinion ignore most of these comments and just do your own thing author. story seems decent and not the normal web novel slop.

  • Free20play
    Free20play2 days ago
    回復 world_domination

    because SHIELD are just government stooges at the end of the day. people can’t get around this idea that the avengers and shield are separate entities. avengers rely on shield for Funding&legitimancy. shield on the other hand tries their best to control the avengers as much as they can.

  • Free20play
    Free20play4 days ago
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    i feel like i read this story before? is this a rewrite or something?

  • Free20play
    Free20play4 days ago
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    finally a good fic got translated. been waiting for this one. glad to see theres people with good taste. . …………………………………………………………………………………….

  • Free20play
    Free20play8 days ago
    回復 tido_racks

    i feel like the system is the mc. maybe thats just me.

  • Free20play
    Free20play8 days ago
    回復 Detective_Raven

    okay lemme spell this out. the mc basically has a worm thinker shard/power on steroids with the only limit so far being his own creativity. https://worm.fandom.com/wiki/Tinker do you understand how overpowered that even is when placed on a meta aware individual who has knowledge of say fictional verses from books,videogamss,tv shows,anime? since you have low reading comprehension and imagination. let me explain to you just how he could break the setting. you know that so called ineffective nasuverse holy grail that doesn’t really do true wish granting? yeah well guess what. this shinji si could literally make the miracle machine. https://dc.fandom.com/wiki/Miracle_Machine

  • Free20play
    Free20play8 days ago
    回復 Detective_Raven

    i feel like you made this comment without even reading this story at all. low reading comprehension strikes again. its tiresome. it really is. mc has a science based power.(read the first fucking chapters goddamnit) the story title has “inspired” in it. mc literally built cortana. mc literally built a warframe. your first thought process is i want some weak ass “true” magic user mc instead because me no likey this. why’d you even read this then? if this story isn’t the usual slop that you like? like why?

  • Free20play
    Free20play8 days ago
    回復 Detective_Raven

    are we even reading the same story? this shinji si’s power is literally super science + creativity. why da fuck would he go for an easy option with low ceiling and low returns.(limiting himself) when he could literally make marvels the fury(yes that fury the same one that fought mad jim jaspers),sentinel robots,amazo androids,reality bombs and literally dab on the entire nasuverse setting using super science? what is even the point? there is no point to even bothering. this shinji has meta knowledge. last chapters he was making a makeshift warframe even. nasuverse magic is not even that strong. bro this si can literally make a portal gun from rick n morty. he has literally infinite options. why would he waste his time asking tiamat help him gain a true magic when it can be trumped by anything he himself could whiz up? i don’t think you understand just how ridiculous this mc’s power is. and i don’t blame you since you’re thinking too small. anyways magic is just lazy n boring. there are already 10000 fics that play out that way in the fate fanfic community. this is one of the rare ones that subverts that trope. your suggestion is lazy and would only go against the stories theme. its the same as fanfics that throw a superman expy or si into marvel and go have him learn magic from kamar taj. just lazy and boring writing.

  • Free20play
    Free20play8 days ago
    回復 rafa_espi

    he can create anything really. dr.who style reality bombs,tardises,reed richards ultimate nullifiers,dc’s miracle machine,the reality cube,ricks portal gun.