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Chinese really? It's Japanese people that eat raw fish.

It's a wish fulfilment story frankly because it can't possibly be anything else. Story should have just focused on what readers wanted, probably the oshi no no was the most interesting plot point with his children also being reincarnators. If this wasn't a reincarnators novel well... As the author points out he really didn't intend to be a fate universe and it really shows. Theres a fundamental ignorance if what a magus is. Should have stuck to some generic DxD universe.

Might want to buy the idol company.

Sorry with no instructor, sparring partner, or real world experience his training isn't worth much.

Are you trying to make him an Achilles?

Why did you give.him so much stuff? A soldier and materia would put him at a solid top of Orario.

I think the initial premise had potential then it became apparent we were getting a rerun of mahouka with a new third wheel. If MC wants to have a low profile he should show some initiative doing so, instead of the plot constantly dragging him along.

Umm, yes there are repercussions for killing civilians...

He's going to need someone to train him. Preferably before he ends up developing a lot of bad habits.

I'd focus on making a comedy or slice of life genre. Avoid drawing out battle scenes or levelling focus. With these kind of stats any kind of battle is pointless.