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WAHAHA, it's my first time reading a novel with this opening. So intriguing!
Dear Immortal Lady, This novel that you've written has piqued thy interest and I couldn't wait to shower you with compliments, "compliments~ compliments~ Take it all!" hehehe. After reading the first 3 chapters, this is my verdict: Writing Quality: Have you seen the clouds in the sky? The writing quality is heavenly~ Story Development: Like the growth of a fair maiden? Something worth admiring for~ Character Design: Like a descent of a meteor. Although it was fast, it'll leave an impression! Particularly the female lead and male lead. Well done! Updating Stability: She's an immortal~ she writes without sleep, or taking a bath? well I hope she updates like the night. World Background: It was so interesting! Particularly the rebirth part, I love the concept! And of course, her new world which is something to look forward to! Overall: The author is beautiful. Sincerely Yours, Immortal Beggar that fell in the stinky pond.
Well done! Everything are arranged nicely!
This is amusing! HAHAHA
Why does it sounds like you, your majesty? HAHAHA
Literally died by a slap of a car door? HAHAHA
Jeep yarn? HAHAHAHA
I had laid my eyes into something good again... As such, let this humble beggar leave behind a verdict once again. hehe Writing Quality: 9.9999/10, Top-notch. The words are weaved in a not so light yet not so heavy way. There are some grammatical errors but they were so minute that it doesn't affect the story development much. The sentence structure and paragraph blending are also nicely done. Stability of Updates: 10/10 Story Development: 10/10, the pacing is nice and refreshing. Not too heavy nor too light, just perfect blend. Particularly at the early part where the author describe the MC's appearance, her way of connecting the scenes to reach that point is admirable. Character Design: 10/10, perfectly suits the genre. The main lead and his love love is so cute. They were multidimensional. World Background: 10/10, Truly a supernatural novel. I love the concept of the enemies. Well done! To all BL lovers, the vivid scenes in the novel are worth looking forward for. "Ahehe~"