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oh man. he should learn ink jutsu. imagine what he could draw.
it sucks that he is using powers homelander doesn't have. he should have handicapped himself. and only used flight, strength and heat vision. that way it's more fun with the battles.
you should have had the MC change his name to Adam. he could pretend to be the original human.
I'm suprised you don't have like 50 chapters already completed. if I was you I would take a week and write chapters. then release one every 2 days while you keep yourself ahead.
it would be nice if he wasn't on the lacrosse team. that's a little too close to the MC
that's what I was saying. he's been regrowing his whole body for like 300 chapters.
??? MMA is art that doesn't have any fancy movement. it's literally the most practical stuff from everything.
shouldn't his fatigue be 2/2 now? how is he able to enter another dungeon.
it would be a cool scene once enel saves ace and luffy. and has them on their boa t. he explains why he saved them. how there is no such thing as the gomu gomu no mi. and it's actually the Hita hita no mi : nika