Tumis

Well, maybe not drama, but *tension* is definitely there. Don't know how to word it, but you know what i meant if you have read some english novel, not a translation

The story is nice. No sudden ' OP power' despite there is *system*; The MC gain power through progression. Oh, and character relationship is Ok. MC is like the... heir-clan guys at Naruto class big brother. Dialogue is nice too, no stiff. Currently theres's no romance, though maybe its's with Kiba's sister, with how often MC visits her (though for the puppies, but she's there). Nothing serious though. Writing quality is also good. And this is not translation, so there will be *drama* *tension* kind of thing instead of face-slapping or random person awe. Though, this story also embrace some japanese style story with many PoV changes. In fact, that's why i will drop this after this far. Too many PoV changes. Though they're not repeating the same story, but progressing the story through their PoV, in detail. Like, currently its chunin exam arc. Some chapters filled entirely with Naruto, Shikamaru, Ino and others battle, in their PoV each. with detailed description of their battle.

And the naming too. The schlicking ones should be the shopkeeper/photographer (stella something) right?

... Is this something like a filler chapter? Or wrong posted chapter?

Another story gaining strength too quickly with system and *cheat*. Yes, the MC have both *system* (shop) and cheat/golden finger or whatever (immortality). In 1 (one) month, the MC can use advanced Conqueror Haki and stand his ground against Rayleigh. And MC background was a servant/slave with civilian power with no training whatsoever. Though, he did got trained by Garp. Still, it's just 1 month (The story mentioned the time the MC joined the Marine when chasing and/or fighting against Roger's Pirate, said it was less than 1 month. So, not made up number) Anyway, the good thing is writing (or translation) quality is good, with just 1 character name mistake so far. The navy military rank is also not weird. The skill's names also OK. Closing remarks; Not really recommended unless you got nothing left to read. At least the english is good; you'll not auto-correct the words as you read

Not recommended , unless you're very bored. Seems like a summary of events, bloated a bit (Like other chinese novels), add some more things, and sewed together. At least the author researched things, some obscure things. Though as is with this genre, plagiarism is to be expected. Lots of it. And face-slapping is normal in this story; MC does/offer something, others reject him, MC does another thing, and others be like 'Damn, shouldn't provoke/reject him'. And dialogue is rare. As for harem... Well, its like a casual fling; no serious relationship yet. And don't expect detailed romance scenes. Chinese novel don't have it. Oh, and translation quality. They're readable. And based on other reviews, translator is doing some editing. Though will not be the same quality if the original is english. Some wordings are weird, it's more likely because the original version is like that. Like, lost in translation, but make sense in the original language kind of thing

And am wondering why this marked as complete. The story is in the middle of a plot...

Interesting story. The MC reincarnate to a dying orphan who just started Hogwarts. Then doing jobs to earn money, doing magic things to improve self and progress through the year fast. Very fast-paced. Like telling summary of events throughout the year Minimal dialogue. Minimal interaction with other characters. Writing Quality is... sometimes you have to think what the paragraphs mean. Really needs an editor. Cause i don't think even AI will know what to do with the paragraphs. Well, at least better quality than some translation story on this website imo, but not by much. Tl;dr nice story development, very fast-paced story, but also include some character growth. Really need fixing sentences.

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Upsidedown Mountain = Reverse Mountain