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I am Petra Parker

作者: Nov_Vi_
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I woke up in a class, But these people around me, I have seen them Gwen Stacy... Mary Jane... Harry Osborn... ... Good so this is a Spiderman Universe not marvel, But Important Question Where is Peter Parker? Wait, My name is Petra Parker Previous name: Spider-man universe: I replaced Peter Parker

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Good fanfic to read for a while and have a little fun, I didn't expect anything and thank goodness I didn't expect anything, the fanfic isn't bad but it's not good either, what I want to get to is that it's good to read in passing if you don't have anything else to read, it's a good idea but it's poorly executed, the chapters are too short compared to the update rate, and that's fatal since from what I could read they wanted to address the issue of gender change taking into account that the MC was previously a man, but nothing happens with that, I think that if you didn't want to address that issue you wouldn't have mentioned it from the beginning, or also, you could have taken that issue and turned it into a joke, but it was neither one nor the other, although I liked the fact that the MC adapted quickly to the situation, another criticism would be the chapters that cut the flow of the story, if you want to make an omake type chapter you could have pointed it out in the title, by not doing that the flow of the story is cut, and that gives rise to conditions by not I want to know where the hell the story is going, what I want to get to is that this fanfic has no identity beyond the fact that the MC is now a woman and nothing can be done with it, it is simply another story of the bunch, which have nothing wrong with them if you do it right, we have for example the fanfic of "no I would adapt" which is very cliche, but with the references and the comedy, plus it does not take itself seriously it seems like a novel fanfic, in the end I hope you take this criticism as what it is a criticism so that you improve, I know how difficult it is to write, I tried and I could not do more than 2 chapters because I did not know what to do and I got bored, at least you continue with your story and I respect that, that is why despite the fact that your story is not to my liking I am not going to give it a low score, maybe the fanfic serves as inspiration for another person. (Translates)

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