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I am Petra Parker

作者: Nov_Vi_
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I woke up in a class, But these people around me, I have seen them Gwen Stacy... Mary Jane... Harry Osborn... ... Good so this is a Spiderman Universe not marvel, But Important Question Where is Peter Parker? Wait, My name is Petra Parker Previous name: Spider-man universe: I replaced Peter Parker

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A man from an Earth gets the choice to start over in any Universe and chooses an Alternate Pokemon Universe. Let us see if his journey to the top is succesful and the impact he will have on his new world. Pokemon is owned by Nintendo, Game Freak and Creatures Inc. I just use their sandbox for the plot of my MC and my OCs. This will be a "slow" paced story, in fact it's "super slow paced", so please don't expect the MC to directly start his journey in 20 chapters or so, actually multiply that by like 15. A lot is going to happen before that happens. The first 10-20 chapters or so are information heavy, depending on what kind of reader you are. I try to keep my chapter length between 2000 and 3000 words per chapter. My release rate is 4 chapter/week for now. I have a patre*n for those that want to support me with access to some advance chapters as a thank you. patre*n.com/Azrail93 This is an alternate pokemon universe so there will be differences to the games, manga and anime. So if something in the story is different it is most likely on purpose. The original sources are seen as suggestions not laws. Differences can be: Type variants, evolution conditions, strength mechanics, world building and more. If I am at some point asking for reader input I will do so but otherwise I will ignore most suggestions. So please don't spam things like catch this pokemon or do that next. I have my plot planned and external input will be considered when asked for. If I see a suggestion that I believe fit my plot flow I will use it and will credit the commentor. Comments on spelling and grammar mistakes are welcome. I will try to correct said mistakes with time. Constructive criticism will be read and considered. Insult and hate comments will be ignored or deleted depending on severity. Readers naturally can comment their dislike but one worders will be ignored. If the reason for the dislike is explained I will read it. Like previously mentioned pure insults and hate comments will be ignored or deleted. The same is true for simple hate reviews or insulting ones. Reviews complaining about something I warned about, such as the slow pace, will be deleted as well.

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Good fanfic to read for a while and have a little fun, I didn't expect anything and thank goodness I didn't expect anything, the fanfic isn't bad but it's not good either, what I want to get to is that it's good to read in passing if you don't have anything else to read, it's a good idea but it's poorly executed, the chapters are too short compared to the update rate, and that's fatal since from what I could read they wanted to address the issue of gender change taking into account that the MC was previously a man, but nothing happens with that, I think that if you didn't want to address that issue you wouldn't have mentioned it from the beginning, or also, you could have taken that issue and turned it into a joke, but it was neither one nor the other, although I liked the fact that the MC adapted quickly to the situation, another criticism would be the chapters that cut the flow of the story, if you want to make an omake type chapter you could have pointed it out in the title, by not doing that the flow of the story is cut, and that gives rise to conditions by not I want to know where the hell the story is going, what I want to get to is that this fanfic has no identity beyond the fact that the MC is now a woman and nothing can be done with it, it is simply another story of the bunch, which have nothing wrong with them if you do it right, we have for example the fanfic of "no I would adapt" which is very cliche, but with the references and the comedy, plus it does not take itself seriously it seems like a novel fanfic, in the end I hope you take this criticism as what it is a criticism so that you improve, I know how difficult it is to write, I tried and I could not do more than 2 chapters because I did not know what to do and I got bored, at least you continue with your story and I respect that, that is why despite the fact that your story is not to my liking I am not going to give it a low score, maybe the fanfic serves as inspiration for another person. (Translates)

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