TYErannical

what's the meme?

a negative venaloop

loved the beginning and a huge chunk of the middle of the story, but iIhad to stop reading when the main character started having sex with his sister it's honestly bizarre, i can't fathom why you thought that was a good idea. just weird and gross.

That doesn't mean he contradicted himself

really enjoying this so far. takes a leisurely yet entertaining pace that leaves you enjoying the progression of the story. This is definitely a gem in an otherwise dissapointing summer showcase.

wut?

Story's written fairly well and the update stability is good too. My biggest gripe with this story is how boring it is. The main character is a walking automaton that feels nothing and does nothing. He simply is. He is a sociopath that easily adjusted to a cruel world. I wouldn't of felt this to be wrong if this was any other type of novel, but knowing this is a system novel, and that the MC doesn't have to work or strive for any of his power makes it worse. He's basically a pampered child who wouldn't help anybody out of a bad situation even though through out the entire novel he has been recieving incredible help. trash.

please ignore typos wrote this while tipsy

As more and more of these novels come out i can't help but notice the blatant unoriginallity of them all. I won't delve deeper in my criticisms for the writing, only leaving with the observation that it is very fast pace and bland. What i will however file my full complaint with is the TERRIBLE characters. For one they are not portrayed as humans, merely npcs that, after explaining something or merely being there to expunge some word count, dissapear and are rarely if ever characterized or brought up again. This lazy negative aspect is no better portrayed then when these novels describe the main character. Sloppily throwing out vague descriptions with no interesting details. You see it in every one of these novels, "he's hadsome". As if there wasn't any more apparent way of showing that you really didn't care and only wrote this to get a paycheck. Every character is a formulaic redundancy so predictable that i can accurately foretell what they're going to say. This is a grave novel sin. A novel is supposed to give its reader a sort of mystery, in that it reveals its content in unpredictable ways. keeping the readers attention and interest in tandem. You can't do this very well when every other story is a copy of every other story, it's like taking the same bus to work every day, after a while the trip becomes tedious. In conclusion this story isn't a bad story, fiver years ago.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ring