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Warlock Apprentice

作者: Shepherd Fox
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A young traveler who receives enlightenment from another civilization is on a mission to save his beloved mentor. In his journey to seek the ultimate truth, he travels extensively and along the way, he experiences some unpredictable encounters. Will he be able to save his mentor or will his path be derailed?

Chapter 1A Young Man Called Angor

Grue Town, located in the province of Yamei.

As the Month of the Freezing Earth made its debut for the year, this remote little town far from the center of the Goldspink Empire suddenly welcomed a team of knights clad in silver armor, holding banners with a family emblem above their ranks.

Parsel, an old scholar living in the town, widened his eyes and began to shiver in cold sweat upon seeing the emblem on these banners - a python entangled around a full moon, with a fierce tiger stomping on its body.

Dim was the only blacksmith in town, and also a neighbor of Parsel. He noticed the unusual expression on Parsel's face. Not putting down the hookah he had been smoking, he asked Parsel in wonder, "Hey old pal, look at you… You know where these riders come from?"

Taking a deep breath, Parsel whispered to Dim, "If my eyes do not fail me… That mark is the family emblem of the Morn Family."

The Morns?! Dim could only look back at Parsel in shock.

"Are you absolutely sure?"

Without waiting for an answer, Dim jolted realizing something, and dashed into his small blacksmith shop, shutting the door like a coward.

Through the glass window of the shop, Parsel saw the trembling figure of Dim and shook his head. This nasty pair would normally joke about each other in a situation like this, but the Morn Family had visited Grue Town today out of the blue. Considering how powerful they were in the entire empire, Dim had all the reason to be terrified like this.

Parcel recalled hearing those rumors in the Hunter's Pub back in the city.

The Morn Family had been called the backbone of Goldspink Empire. At least six great military generals emerged from it during the centuries after they earned unparalleled merit against several foreign invasions. Besides, none of the family members languished in the back during all those wars - every single one of them were brave and cunning warriors fighting on the front line. It was only natural that such a formidable and celebrated family had seized control of all military affairs in the empire.

Recently, military conflict was eminent between Goldspink Empire and its neighbor, the Heylan Imperials. The border of Heylan Imperials was not far from Grue Town. Perhaps, the knights of the Morns came just for this reason.

Parsel could think of two possible outcomes for their arrival. They either came to recruit, or set up defenses. Or maybe both.

However, either meant deadly news for Dim the blacksmith. For it was clearly written in the Law of Conscription of Goldspink Empire that every family in a city or town that fell within the area of the conscription had to provide a young adult, or offer a hundred gold pieces for a conscription-free token. Dim was the only able male in his family and at the prime age for recruitment. If he went away for war, his wife and daughter would have no means of survival. As for coins… The only family in the entire town that might have enough money for the fee was the Padt Family. Heck, one gold piece was enough to support Dim's family for half a year.

Parsel got out of his shock quick enough. Anyway, an old bachelor like him had nothing to worry about. He'd kick the bucket soon enough. He even had the mind to watch the Morn Family make their move.

They did not go to the town mayor. So they're not here to recruit?

Parsel kept watching as the iron hooves headed towards another direction…

Towards the mansion of Viscount Padtr, a place that still bloomed with grass and flowers even in the Month of Freezing Earth.

The Padt Manor.

A pair of maids wearing cream-colored linen headscarves were chattering during their work.

They were talking about the two young sons of the Padt Family.

"Master and mistress passed away two years ago. According to the law of the empire, in the Month of Frost following this Month of Freezing Earth, the eldest master will inherit the family title," the maid with an apple-shaped face said with a hint of worry. "I wonder what will become of the young master after that."

"Auri, let's not talk about the family business as servants. Personally though, I don't think you should worry about it at all. You probably don't know because you were working at the tea garden far from the mansion, but the two masters are quite close to each other. Those family conflicts you read about in the drama books won't happen here," the maid with a pockmarked face giggled.

The sound of horse hooves came from the narrow trail outside of the garden.

Soon, a rider wearing shining bronze armor appeared in front of the maids.

He halted his horse at the garden entrance and removed his helmet.

He was a vigorous young man with brown hair. The sunlight somewhat deepened the lines and curves on his face, giving the already handsome man an even more extraordinary look.

Those grey-green irises swept past the maids and finally fixed on the middle-aged maid standing beside Auri.

"Greetings to you, Head Maid Mana."

Mana dropped the basket she had been holding and bowed to the knight. "Greetings, Master Leon."

Leon looked at the freshly-picked tea leaves in the basket and sighed. "My brother went to that old man again?"

Mana lowered her head and replied with courtesy, "Master Angor went to study at Mister Jon's."

Leon twitched his lip and muttered to himself, "Study? What the heck's going on with that old geezer, talking about his fallacy all day? Now, Brother learns from him and gives him tea too. That man's just a psycho! I have no idea why brother insists on going there."

He pulled on the reins in annoyance. "I see. You can continue with your work, I'll go look for him."

With that, Leon gave his horse a soft kick and trotted away.

A while later, Leon came to the southeast corner of the manor where an exquisitely designed wooden house supported by suspension stilts sat on a small hill near the woods. It has raising eaves and two parallel levels. Only one side of the house actually touched the earth, the other three stayed in the air, merely supported by stilt pillars.

No matter how you looked at it, this wooden house didn't sit well among any of the structures in Goldspink Empire. Leon couldn't even recall seeing such similar buildings during his travels in the other nations.

"What a curious house. It looks sturdy though most of it doesn't have solid ground." Leon was still frustrated about how the old man occupied too much of his brother's time, but that didn't stop him from admiring the amazing craftsmanship of the structure… He just didn't show that on his face. Besides, it's the house that Leon was interested in, not Jon himself. Maybe this was a common sight from where Jon came? Although Leon never figured out where that was even when Jon had been living in the Padt Manor for nearly 20 years.

Pushing open the wooden bars, Leon saw some vegetables and fruits growing in the yard. There were some withered vines crawling on the racks nearby. They grew "hanging clusters" in the Month of Harvest, and Jon called them "grapes". Leon remembered their sweet taste. However, it was currently off season.

Behind the bamboo door of the house was a young man with a handsome look swiftly writing something on parchment rolls using his quill and ink.

Leon approached him. He tried to be soft on his steps, but those bronze armored boots still produced a heavy noise on the wooden floor.

"Ah, you're here." The young man put a period on the parchment and looked up at the visitor, his clear voice filled with friendly passion.

"Angor! My dear brother. You sound as if you knew I would come." Leon smiled.

Angor shrugged and grinned, "No. But this will make me more… proactive."

"You learned this from that old man too?"

Angor shook his head. "No one needs to teach me that. Our father used to talk like this anyway."

"So… If someone misinterprets your will and doesn't talk at all, how would you start the conversation then?" Leon raised an eyebrow.

"I'll just stay silent and wait for it."

"What if that man does the same?"

Angor curled his lip. "That would be embarrassing. I think I'll turn to leave, lest I get embarrassed and continue whatever there is if he decides to stop me."

Leon only smiled and nodded without giving any comment. He then looked around the room.

"Where's good old Jon?"

Hearing this, Angor frowned a little and showed a bit of worry. "You know, Teacher's body is getting worse by the day, every part of him is… wilting. His legs completely gave in the day before yesterday. He just applied his medicine and is now resting upstairs."

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RoachTheRoach
RoachTheRoachLv5

THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR THE NEW RELEASE NOVEL AND THEREFORE IS ONLY UP TO DATE ON THE MOST RECENT CHAPTER (14). Tags: Male Lead; Magic; ? Age Rating: 12+ - No strong language thus far in the first 14 chapters, but violence is likely to occur and there has been some slight horror themes. Summary: A man calling himself Jon is transported to a different world, carrying with him only a plant and the object used to transport himself there- the Alien Eye. The noble Padt Family saves him from his near-death state and takes him in, offering him a job as a fruit grower. This is not his story. Twenty years later, Viscount Noah Padt, the man who originally took in Jon is dead, and his eldest son Leon Padt stands to inherit. Angor Padt, the younger son, has been mentored by Jon, and learned of a strange place called "Earth." However, Jon, at a mere fifty-some years of age, is withering away. He tells Angor that "Gaia's Will," or the will of this world, is rejecting him for not being originally from there. When Count Eton comes through, seeking the "Morning Dew," or a tea made from the plant Jon had brought with him, a wizard is accompanying him. Wizards are the stuff of myths and legends, but this one reveals himself for the Morning Dew. After it helps him achieve a breakthrough, he offers the Padts one favor. Though Angor first tries to save Jon, the wizard fails. Instead, Angor asks for the oppurtunity to become a wizard. During his testing, it is revealed that Angor does indeed have the necessary talent. Translation Quality: 5/5: There are no obvious grammar or spelling errors, and everything seems fine. Stability of Updates: 4/5: Hard to judge. I'm giving it a 4/5 since we can't tell this early on in the translation. Story Development: 5/5: Already interesting and unique. Instead of centering around the transmigrator (Jon), it instead follows someone else who is trying to save him. A refreshing change from the multitude of reincarnation/transmigration/time travel stories on Webnovel. Additionally, the story seems to be avoiding most the extremely obvious cliches, such as a family drama over the line of succession (that we see in almost EVERY female lead novel and quite a few of the male lead novels here). In fact, this line is stated by two servants talking about the line of succession since Leon will inherit everything: "Those family conflicts you read about in the drama novels won't happen here." Character Design: 5/5: Characters are unique and have their own personalities. Also, people can CHANGE THEIR MINDS. Wow. Mindblowing! The wizard, who originally planned to burn down Padt Manor in search of the Morning Dew, changes his mind and later offers them a favor when they give it to him out of their own goodwill. World Background: 2/5: As soon as the wizard comes, we discover there's a whole other larger world out there. ...this is honestly so overused. Main character coming from a tiny backwater? Discovers powers? It's extremely cliche, and I expected better. Overall: A nice change of pace from most of the cultivation novels here. I will note that it does seem to have some cultivation aspects, with breakthroughs and ranks for the wizards. I will continue reading this! Please like this if you want to see more actual review and not just "Guuuuuuuddd" or "Ugh terrible" in the review sections! Also note that this is an early review supposed to give people an IDEA of what the story is like, and that there are only 14 chapters out!

DragonSlayer1355
DragonSlayer1355Lv3

You know man I'm having a hard time understanding why this series is so praised, I've read 2200+ chapters (mtl) and I can say w confidence that this series is at best average. Why? Well mate, let me tell you, it doesn't have a unique universe and premise like Daoist GU, the universe in which this series happens is your average Warlock of the Magus World like universe w a bit of D&D, with all of their tropes, even more, this series is nowhere near as satisfying or entertaining as WOTMW. The MC is boring, the series is overfilled with fillers, you know I never disliked fillers as I can understand to some extent why they exist but here we are overwhelmed by them like there are a hundred chapters of worthless filler. The MC is well, very bland and boring like he isn't anything special or noteworthy, you probably have seen a few other MC just like this one in some other series. My biggest problem w this series is by far is progression like it's so fkin slow, it's even slower than e frikin snail. This world supposedly has 7-8 ranks (not taking into consideration the additional apprentice realm, every magus starts from here) that we know of (it most likely has more), now let me ask you, how many chapters do you think it takes the MC to reach the magus realm, yes the first realm, the realm after apprentice realm? Did you say 300? Maybe 500, even 1000? NO, YOU ARE WRONG IT TOOK FKIN 2000 CHAPTERS FOR THE MC TO REACH RANK 1 MAGUS, AND THERE ARE AT LEAST 7 REALMS, 2000 FKIN CHAPTERS, and I'll let you know that your average web novel series has somewhere between 1000-2000 chapters, now can you understand just how bad the power progression is? You might think maybe he has some special skills that let him as a rank 1 magus to defeat those above him, but no you are wrong, the MC can't even beat a rank 2 magus. Yeah, 2k chapters and this is where we got, this is even more frustrating when the MC is surrounded and used by rank 2+ magus. So yeah, this series was decent at the beginning, I'm someone who doesn't mind slow development, Daoist Gu is the best example, it was somewhat slow at the beginning but in the end, it became insanely good, but here the author overdid it to such an extent where he broke the series... Like it took the MC 2k chapters to reach rank 1, then many how chapters it will take for him to reach rank 9, tens of thousands of chapters? So yeah in the end I would honestly never recommend this to anyone, it's way way way too slow placed and very unsatisfying, you would expect some mind-blowing story w so much development, but no we get none of that, it's just your average human mortal in his very slow journey to the apex.

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

This is in the middle of the pack when it comes to wizard cultivation novels. Unlike its predecessors it has realistic individuals with enough kind people to balance out the arrogant ones. The MC isn't evil and cares a bit about friendship. However, there are a lot of things I dislike. First is the slow progression. It has taken 170 chapters just for the MC to unlock his magic. This amount of time is ridiculous and should've never happened. Second is the amount of time the MC is an apprentice and taking unnecessary risks. He should have been smarter based off his previous teacher Jon, but instead he has been selling alchemy weapons, participating in death matches for fun and allowing his enemies who want to kill him to power up at a faster rate than him (Which is BS as the MC should be over 10 times faster with his technique.) Thirdly is the way how the author tries to create mystery in this novel about the 'truth'. What truth are you even talking about?? You never really gave it a real explanation and used it as a plot stopper by making his own teacher refusing to teach the MC anything at all because this rank 2 wizard wants a 15yr old boy to find the 'truth' of the universe by himself in 1 year. And the last problem I have is how the MC hasn't shown any urgency to save Jon. Instead the author has held it off and only brought it up when ever its relevant in the arcs. Overall I dropped this fic around chapter 265 due to the pacing being horrendously slow. (Weird since I usually love slow pace stories.)

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