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Vergil in another world (Reboot Up)

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A man gaining the inheritance of 3 amazing people through luck. I do not own anything in my novel other than my OC's. Including the cover of this novel.

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Chapter 1Prologue

In a deep black darkness, a soul is floating without a care in the space he lived in. He woke up and opened his eyes and all he can see was a vast area of darkness.

"What happened? Where am I? The last thing I remembered was dying peacefully and lying down after finishing my last masterpiece."

I swam and swam but there's nothing at all. Its like a vast space that you can roam and feel like you're just in the same place, not moving at all.

Time passed and he was just there trying to pass his time with anything he can do, roll around, make a one man skit, make himself laugh with his own jokes, and ponder of the things he did in life. He was an orphan since his parents died in an accident when he was just 10 years old, being the heir of the wealth of his parents many tried to take it away from him but he didn't give it, making them bully the little child.

He was forced to mature early and had no one to trust except for his mother's little sister. She took him in and take good care of him, he knows as well that his aunt has no motives in helping him, just genuine care. She also didn't need the inheritance when he asked her if she wants to take it as she said she has enough source of income and is wealthy herself.

He learned that she was a widow as her husband was killed due to the schemes of his other uncle and aunt as her husband is disturbing the big pie that they are getting. Finding solace in her elder sister's son she took him in as her own son and raised him to be a fine man.

He decided to pick up arts and painting as his main craft, being obsessed in learning arts, he used his parent's inheritance and the income from their shares in the company.

He learned from the very best school focused in Arts and Painting and from the best teachers in the hopes of creating an art that will make the world in awe like the legendary painters.

He created many paintings and gained money from selling them to auctions and decided to have his revenge on his own family who will kill their own just for the sake of money. He funded his long-time friend in creating a company that can face his own family's company.

With his funding and very good innovations, the company grew larger and larger and his family's company was always making failed investments but he was not satisfied by it, he want them to face the consequences of all their actions.

He hired a professional hacker and investigator to gain dirt on his family members except the one who took him in who, apparently died early due to an illness that wasn't detected early. On her deathbed she was smiling peacefully and she wished that she gets to meet her husband again.

Back to digging dirt on his family members, he let them dig dirt on them and when he got all the compiled files, he sent copies of it to major tv stations which caused them to be arrested and will be judged in the court.

Time passed by and now he was an old man, in his deep quest for revenge, he forgot about his goal of creating an art that will shock and awe the world and be shown to younger generations, he deeply regretted that he can't make it anymore because of old age. And for the last time, he grabbed his brush and decided to create his last masterpiece.

Time passed by but he didn't bother stopping, not even eat as he was concentrating on creating his final masterpiece. In the end he made it, his own masterpiece. It may not have shocked the world and caused it to look at it in awe and envy but to him, it was enough. It was a fine masterpiece for him and himself alone.

What he painted was a picture of himself as a child with his parents alongside his aunt who took care of him and her husband. He thought of a name for the painting and wrote it in a piece of paper and stick it at the back of his painting alongside his signature as he wrote it in habit. He marveled at it once again and laid himself down to rest. The paper for some reason fell down from the painting with the word.

"Famiglia"

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RichBoyWinston
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So here is my review, sorry for being harsh to you author. First off, if you are looking for a great, well-written history this is not for you. The novel is full of potholes as the author himself admitted, and he writes mainly for fun. Well if you are a fan of these cliche DxD fanfics on this site, this one is better than those. My review is rather long, so if you don't to read everything just scroll down to the end. Writing Quality: 4/5- The novel has a bunch of grammar errors but nothing major. Compared to the novels on this site, the grammar is good and only grammar nazis would be bothered by it. Stability of Updates: 5/5- So far the author keeps releasing chapters at a decent rate. Story Development: 2/5- And this where all the problems begin. Let's have a look at how the MC was sent to the DxD world. He meets God who gives three powers to him, and each of these powers is a wish of his parents. Now, why would a god bother giving a wish to random mortals with so many people on Earth? No reason was given, the MC never bothered to ask why as well, he just accepted everything. It was hinted that it could be for God's entertainment, but it still felt forced for the MC to never think about that. The rest of the history is the usual predictable cliche. MC gets immense powers right from the initial chapters, though I praise the author for at least including a training arc. He then proceeds to go around showing off these powers because the author wants us to think the MC is "cool", using cliche stuff like brats from powerful families challenging the MC to a spar, and trying to kill him during the said spar, and the MC humiliates them to assort dominance and blah blah blah. Also, it's a system novel with summons from other anime, so the MC who is already strong will have a bunch of OP characters as well to help him besides having some of these characters into his harem. Yes, it's a harem. Character Design: 2/5- And there are also problems with this part. Let's start with the MC personality. The MC at least has some unique traits, like liking books and art, but he still acts like any cliche Chinese novel protagonist. In his first battle he killed left and right without any kind of mercy, I wouldn't bother about this if the author explained why he is so ruthless, but he didn't explain anything. His first kill ever and he didn't even blink! The MC immediately turned into a cold killer once he entered that world for no reason. His first kill went like this: "He sliced his enemy head off, the end." This only would be possible if the MC was some kind of psychopath or sociopath, but he cares about his friends like any other normal person. Also on his fight with the "young master", he cut his arm off and told him and his family that they should be glad because he usually killed those that tried to kill him. What? He is literally a child at that point and only fought a single time in that world, his old world also does not count since he didn't kill anyone there, so he only started killing his enemies a day ago. For some reason, the author is acting like he is some kind of certified badass who has killed countless people since his previous life. The other characters are as 2D as 2D can get, nothing is interesting about them. I'm sure 99% of this novel readers only care about the MC. World Background:3/5- It's a fanfic, so don't expect any major world-building. The author did some creative stuff like adding another anime into the DxD universe to give humans power, but that was it. In a nutshell: This novel has a very cliche MC that changes his personality to fit the author's tastes and goes around showing off his immense power to the world, a bunch of plotholes, is a harem system novel with summons, and progresses like all the usual cliche novels out there. It has some good stuff though. To the author: Sorry for criticizing your novel so much mate, but you can't correct your errors without knowing them. You are welcome to talk badly about my novel too, just don't get discouraged by my review, ok :v? Keep writing cause you have readers that like your work, no novel is perfect including mine, it's all cool as long as you are happy writing it.

UnknownToAll
UnknownToAllLv15

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