Type Moon System In A Foreign World

Hey guys! Author-san here! This review isn't really a proper review considering I'm pretty biased against something that is my own work, so I'll just use this as a way to inform people of the setting and the update schedule and whatnot. I'd like to get 1 chapter a day released (considering I've got to juggle uni with a job and everything) so unless I've got extra time or something, it'll more than likely just be 1 chapter a day. I actually finish Uni around about the 10th of November, so after that time I'll definitely be uploading more and more considering will have much more time on my hands. Anyway, this story is supposed to be something similar to "Grand Shoujo Summoning" or "Naruto System in Another World", however with specifically Type-Moon aspects. I want to try and encompass the whole Nasuverse so things will go into detail about games like Notes and Mahoutsukai no Yoru and all that. Anyway, I hope everyone has a good time reading, and if there are any spelling mistakes or errors in grammar, please leave a note and I'll try and fix it! Thanks!

Firstly the novel isn't bad per se which is why the author got a higher score on writing quality. If you don't like summons/outsiders to know about system this isn't for you. If you've read summon novels and know they won't last this isn't for you. If you hate extremely annoying characters this isn't for you The comedy is bland and makes me cringe think of Japanese light novels. All in all the mc reminds me of a Japanese beta run is perfectly depicted so she's annoying asf and it's only chapter 5. Now onto about chapter 7 it goes downhill. To be fair to the author if you like Japanese betas, annoying tsunderes with classic unfunny japanese style comedy this is for you! And before the fan boys attack me it's my opinion so if you're just gonna curse at me then f*ck off. If you've got counter argument then reply. a similar novel that's good is Type moon irregularity it's dropped tho~

this novel is very good as it is going so far it is not like other novels that go to action once you are going at their own pace the author used very well the use of characters like rin knowing how to write his personality this novel has potential hopefully not like those mc that become op and arrogant series good to have sis moments of romance and an average harem not like those huge harem in which the mc barely interacts with them it would also be that the mc had more male companions I give this novel 10/10 keep up the good work I really like this novel

Well thought. Grammar is good. Daily chapters. Dialogues are really good, feels human. I don't understand what they don't like about this. Recommended

Keep I up the good work I want to see this novel reach at least 200 chaps So write slave author if your hand can't write anymore use your feet But seriously tho keep it up I'm liking the story already👍

WANTED: Missing author if you find him chain him to a computer and force him to continue this great story...[sad face on milk carton] ....................................................................

This story is GOLD! Please, keep it up. I’ll difficult to find good Fate novels. The novel has lots of potential. I don’t really have any complains. This is great!

Really like this idea, big fan of the MC, looks like he is having a lot of fun but at the same time he is preparing for what comes next. Rin's characterization is good, her personality is similar to what we see in the nasuverse.

Everything is good in a general analysis and I would like to continue reading. The story is interesting and the characters have personality. It is a healthy combination of the elements of the wuxian and Japanese novels. Do not drop. THIS KING IS PLEASED REJOICE MONGREL!!!!!!

Don't drop I loke it. Here a free Mordred

this novel is too good 😃 😄 😁😁😆😘🥰🥰😍😍🤩🌹🌹🌹🌹 ❤️❤️❤️ has you can see from the over use of emojies i loved this story so keep writing author-sama

One month no update looks like the story is dead, I am sad it was great.............................................................................................................

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This is so good. I like the gacha more and more as the story progresses. Can't wait ti find our what the first gold ring was, could it be a reality marble? Woulf love to know if the wuxia world he is in is original or based on something published.

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