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THE FIRST RAIN (BL)

作者: Diorcesses
Fantasy
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The world has beautiful roses as well as torns that carve up Leansei's beautiful life into a miserable existence. Until he met the vicious, cold, arrogant guy that he met for the second time after having an incident. He transmigrated from the other body, which he had no idea what was happening or who it was, but it altered his life until he found out that his life was in grave danger. The black organization is after his life, but he can't stay longer. The dark secrets unfold and the perfidy is revealed. Will he still go back or stay even if it is not possible? ________ This book is open from other platform as well

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Lourvene
LourveneLv2Lourvene

I'll be waiting for this!!! Authorr be gooood to usss. giveee us moreeeee. Actually i learned that leansei is such a cute bb and i feel very bad for him to work everydau with 3 jobs seriously??[img=update][img=fp]

Tyron_Levio
Tyron_LevioLv2Tyron_Levio

i was waiting for another chapter how would they met or what they would be happy. I mean you can see in every chapter. social issue was discussed if you notice it

luley
luleyLv1luley

Its cool ill be looking forward how this novel ends. how will he meet him or is he a green flag or red flag? HAHAHAHAHA updateee moreeee authorrr mwuaaa [img=recommend]

Zaurest
ZaurestLv1Zaurest

i somewhat can't picture what's going to be the next chapter like im sucking in to wait for more. The plot line or the starting was good also. Im starting to feel bad about kean tho.

Oh_Dirthr
Oh_DirthrLv1Oh_Dirthr

Im starting to like the ML but im wondering for the other cp too [img=recommend][img=recommend]. This is not a love triangle right? the author gives us a starting point which i dont know what would be the end of this

Tjrama
TjramaLv1Tjrama

The characters were good and the ml or the side cp ia not that toxic (maybe) im looking forward about kean since sheets happens ya know leansei is gonna fcked up the life of kean

Tyron_Levio
Tyron_LevioLv2Tyron_Levio

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Miss_Asriya
Miss_AsriyaLv1Miss_Asriya

First of all, the plot is amazing! The first chapters where the main character struggles, is just felt. I mean i am immersed in his life. Great writing also, the way the author writes this novel is very comprehensible, which is a big plus. Great job author! This story have great potential! Keep it up! Very recommendable!

Excelsior_x
Excelsior_xLv3Excelsior_x

Love the story and the characters seem real. The start to the story was good and you feel bad for Kean. The grammar is quite goo and the story develops in such a way that you want to know what happens in the next chapter.

Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv11Rayne_Rue

A great description, love the characters . the grammar is quite okay and the updating development is great too , keep writing more chapters great work. they are a few mistakes and that can be dealt with soon,

Soniimarx
SoniimarxLv1Soniimarx

Okay, so I read through the first two chapters before I made a review and I must say, I do like Leansei and how hardworking he is. The scenes and the dialogue are quite nice though they could be written a tad bit better, but who am I to nitpick? There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but it's nothing that can't be improved on. So far I like the premise of the story, and I look forward to reading the rest.

RosemilOduor
RosemilOduorLv11RosemilOduor

I'm so glad I came across this. I haven't read the whole book yet but so far, I love what I have read. Keep up the good work. I'll recommend the book among my friends.

Nikkie_LZ
Nikkie_LZLv11Nikkie_LZ

Although I have zero experience within this genre (except one manga that I read), I loved the author's fresh and clear writing style. It was a new experience—a very beautiful one, I might add. All the luck to the author and the novel. Note: The characters are so relatable thou (chef kisses)

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