This is a great story. From start to end we see the characters learn from their experiences and genuinely form connections. While there are some easily fixed typos and grammatical errors, the writing is fluid and engaging. Congratulations on creating a one of a kind world and filling it with realistic and relatable characters. Your commitment to diversity and staying away from often harmful stereotypes is hard to find in the writing world. I highly recommend to anyone who wants to read a heartwarming story about love and friendship. Honestly I can't wait for what you do next.

I'm kind of jumping the gun here, since I've only read a few chapters in. I'm giving full marks for the ambition and originality of this storyline. So, far the writing isn't pretentious, but respectful. I always hold a bit of worry when writers attempt to write from perspective of less able people. Since I'm almost cognitively deaf myself, I feel uncomfortable when there is a stereotype of pity applied to conditions. You didn't do this as far as I can see. So, I give kudos. Writing-wise, the pace is fluid and easy, and character design is distinct, with the world design unravelling naturally and logically. Not much info dump, which was good. Keep at it.

Hmmm haven't read it so far but the summary is very compelling. The characters have different personalities and background. It's making me curious how will the story develops and who will be the mc's love interest. I wish there will be no harem. Please. 😅🙏

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I hope that the author will released the following chapters. This is such an interesting story. It would be such a waste if we won't be able to read the rest til the end. The story development and character design is a perfect match for the flow. So I hope that this will be completed..

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Started to read and found it nice story, love it hopefully the story will relese frequently and complete finish Keep it up author 💪🙏💙💙💙

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