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shameless review here. as you all know im new so please show me the typos . i dont know what to write here anyways the story's viewer integration will be like this comment - 1 np powerstone - 1 sp review - 1 dp

The story holds potential, just ignore all the spelling errors. If you care for the spelling errors, well....uhhhhh, this ain't the story for you. Yet. Maybe the author will get better when it comes to spelling and grammar? Maybe.

the start was good for a newbie and there was some typos. lemme spam for post eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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