The Divine Blades

I have read a lot of reincarnation books so i was a bit apprehensive but the synopsis is good and the storyline is great. Chapter one has a bit of grammatical errors but the author improved that in chapter two so its definitely worth the read. P.S I am in love with muffet.

The dialogues, pacing and world building were amazing. Keep up the good work.

I give the book 5 stars,the MC is the type of book characters i love

A brilliant start, good flow of story and excellent character design. Though the numberof chaptersare low at the moment, the storyis going in right direction and shows good potential. Highly recommend.

劇透

waiting for more chapters, keep it up author.

Wow, wow, wow! I have only read the first chapter, but I just couldn't wait to comment on how amazing this story is so far! Out of all the Webnovel stories I've read so far, this is the best one yet. The moment I dived into the story, I was already possessed with amazement by the creative use of words, and the jaw-dropping storyline. The characters are well-portrayed in the first chapter. The reader already gets an idea of what the main characters are like even before jumping into the next chapter.The dialogue between the characters flows naturally, and the pacing of the story is good too. I definitely look forward to seeing what happens next 🤩 keep up the good work, author!

It’s got it all. Actions, romances, comedy’s. W novel. The tags don’t lie.

[img=update][img=update]Great book with good developments. It only lacks in few grammatical constructions, which as you can see from the latest chapter - the author had improved by significant percentage.

I had to add this one to my library because of the way it captivates you into wanting to read it. It starts out so stronger and does waist time explaining what the reader should already know.

The Divine Blades has a lot of potential, especially with its reincarnation and magic-based world. Soujin’s journey as a reluctant captain is engaging, but the story could benefit from more development in a few key areas. For example, in Chapter 4: Captain's Meeting, many side characters are introduced briefly, but we don’t get much insight into their personalities. Adding personal traits or conflicts for the other captains could make the scene more memorable and make the stakes feel higher. The dialogue, particularly in Chapter 7: Preparations, often feels a bit flat. When Soujin and Muffet talk about their mission, there’s a lot of straightforward back-and-forth, but not enough emotional tension. It’d be nice to see more hesitation or humor woven in, giving their relationship more depth. Similarly, the action scenes, like the dragon fight in Chapter 3: Dragon Slayer, could benefit from richer descriptions. Instead of saying "Soujin slashed the dragon," you could slow down the moment with more sensory details: “Soujin’s blade scraped against the dragon’s hardened scales, sparks flying as the weight of the beast’s body strained his grip.” This would immerse readers more deeply in the battle. In Chapter 5: Serious Matter, Soujin faces the pressure of leadership, but his inner struggles aren’t fully explored. Does he feel fear, excitement, or doubt? Expanding on his internal conflict would make him more relatable and add emotional depth to the plot. Finally, the world-building is intriguing, but it could be more seamlessly integrated into the narrative. In Chapter 6: Money, for instance, you get a glimpse into the logistical side of being a Divine Blade, but it feels disconnected from the grander fantasy setting. Tying these details more closely to the world’s politics or culture would make the setting richer. Overall, it’s a solid start, but fleshing out the characters, dialogue, and descriptions would take The Divine Blades to the next level. I’m looking forward to seeing how the story evolves!