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Shade_Arjuun
Shade_ArjuunLv1410mth
2024-06-19 06:18

Really good read so far! The thing that stands out most for me in this book is the dialogue. The character designs are nice and all, but the dialogue is really fleshing out our characters, like Soujin, who is surprisingly spirited and driven and a little snarky, or Muffet, who threw me for a loop with her whole 'interaction' with Captain Blackhart. You get a feel of the fact that these characters are more than meets the eye. The action is good so far and I appreciate the immediate dive into Sword Magic and Mystcry. I hope the fact that Soujin is starting as a Captain won't hamper how we perceive power progression in the story (if that is something the author intends to explore). All in all great read

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I have read a lot of reincarnation books so i was a bit apprehensive but the synopsis is good and the storyline is great. Chapter one has a bit of grammatical errors but the author improved that in chapter two so its definitely worth the read. P.S I am in love with muffet.

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