The Architect of Balance

The writer here. This is my second work so please bear with me since I'm fairly new. I hope you will enjoy this and leave me with feedback in return. I'll try to get out to you an entertaining story but keep reminding me or I might get busy in real life.

I forgot the tags #magic #secret identity #action #adventure #fantasy #magical animals #powers #family #war #soceity #Childtoadult #Videogame elements #betrayals Also, you might see some people with system so I'll tag #system but it may not come in play later. Way later though

I'm really interested. Especially MC's past which seems simple and yet not. Also, the side characters seems to have personality which I really need to see through. Especially that relationship

Hey, does 100 specify anything special or is it a random number? It really is interesting how it all came about but it was too abrupt. It feels like a buildup which I'm really curious to see. Please hurry with your chapters so that I can read more

Lose and loose are easy to confuse. Lose typically functions only as a verb, with meanings related to failing to win or hold onto something; one might “lose a game” or “lose one’s temper.” Loose can be used as an adjective ("not securely attached"), a verb ("to free something or someone"), and less commonly, a noun or adverb. Source: Merriam-Webster

This is pretty interesting story. The story started with a way that would make you curious what is going to happen. Characters of the story are also interesting enough. A pretty nice fantasy novel if I say.

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I was not sure if I would like this since I came here from your other work which is in a completely different domain than this, but I feel to like this so I'll stick around. The concept is not something I've read till now so I'll stick around for more

Seems really interesting so far. I hope to see how you will develop it. Also, good lunch with the WPC that you entered. I'll add this for now and keep an eye on the development in a few days

Good story, really fun to read too. And by that What I mean to say is - Please update, it's been ages and you just up and left it on a cliff

I was sure I reviewed this before when I first read through but might as well do this again since I'm reading through. It's good and we'll written, though some parts gets confusing like the fire or powers. But I'll keep an eye out all the same

I'm really liking where you are taking this story and I really won't mind more of such stories out there. Can you update a little faster though? If that is not too much pressure on yo?

Please I want you to give me even more than this. This is really good and I'm looking forward to so much more. The thought of such a concept is not new but it is new how you executed this. Especially for me

I really enjoyed the way you portrayed the MC in your book as a young boy who had no reason to live until he died, The fact that he felt like an outcast in his own family made me feel sympathetic for the boy, The writing creates an image for me what it's like as I just stand there in every scene and seeing what it's like through the boys eyes. I enjoyed reading it and looking forward to future updates, well done and keep up the work.

Such a fun read. Don't burn yourself out but give us a steady updating schedule. As a loyal reader of your other workz I don't want you to delay that either

Congrats on the second book being out. I'm loving the character interactions since they're different from your other works but come out as your own style

I have high hopes for this since I genuinely like your other work too so I would like to read more into this. Also, the characters seem really interesting from the get go with personality and nothing like NPCs to progress the story, except the few in the beginning

Sampled this long ago and was waiting for you to post it out. Now that it's out I can finally enjoy this to the extreme. Hopefully you'll maintain the work quality and give us a compelling story to enjoy

Word usage is pretty impressive in the title and no romance is definitely a refreshing concept between all the harem novels out on the platform. Finally something along the lines of what I prefer