Reincarnated As The Villainess's Son

Hello, Author here. Here is my review of the story: Firstly, the core element of the story involves transmigration/reincarnation in a game world, with my own twists added to the narrative. Secondly, if you're reading the story, please take a moment to consider the MC's situation and conditions before criticizing either him or me. Thirdly, I will take my time in developing the harem, so don't expect immediate relationships. The first hundred chapters will focus less on romance. Fourthly, if you find the story unappealing within the first fifteen chapters, feel free to drop it. It may not be to your liking. That's all for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask here. And yes, there will be no NTR or Yuri themes. Thanks for checking out the story. Peace.

Okay let's get this done with. Firstly, I would like to say that I would recommend this novel for others to read. This novel has both good and annoying parts. There's a lot of depth to the Female characters (why am I not surprised) while there is also depth on some of the guys (only some but yeah it does exist). One thing I at least appreciate is that the novel also focuses on Oliver, who's mc's friend. It's almost as if he's a second main character of the novel which makes things interesting. The writing quality is good and while there are occasional grammatical errors, they're obviously present in every novel. The story progression is where things get a bit annoying though. While I do appreciate the fact that mc gets stronger fast, it clearly is not enough. Not to mention, his mother is a very annoying character. Mc literally becomes a dog in front of her. While the reason is justified, it's just plain annoying to see mc's interactions with his mother where he only grovels and gets beaten and tortured up for no reason each time. It's shown that his mother is a very cold and rational person who will do anything to achieve her goals. Then why does she somehow seem to be a sad*st who loves torturing the mc. She wants to use mc as her tool but she just keeps on damaging and permanently scarring his body which lowers his worth. Like does she have brain damage? Also, while the princess is fine, that girl named Shayamal is also annoying (not as much as the mother though). Other than her and the random guys showing up to kill mc every 3 chapters for no apparent reason, other characters like the main FL and Oliver are interesting characters. The interactions between the characters are often funny and lighten the mood which is a plus point. The World Background is ever-expanding as we get to know more about Akasha which is supposedly quite vast and different from the Empire mc is currently in. Overall, I'd rate this around 4-4.1/5 and would recommend you guys to read this. Cause clearly you're interested in this novel, hence the reason you read this long a** review till the end.

It’s from the same author of SOA, so you can expect a masterpiece. I only hope that the schedule of both novels don’t get affected.

i don't what to say about this novel, in first few chapter's i thought it's interesting but after that i think, this novel is f*cked up, author writing skills is good, but this novel 🤡. (sorry if this hurts anyone)

the synopsis is very interesting but the actual story not so much. it's so convoluted and boring. the author trying to make star crossed lovers kind of story but it actually makes me cringe. it's not good fic but it's not awful either. just boring

Author how much longer is my boy going to suffer?! Will anybody find out about how he’s treated by his mother or the choices he’s forced to make? I NEED ANSWERS

I haven't thought about writing a review since it's only 1 ch, but I'm pretty sure it's going to be great like Saga Of Atlantis. But author, will the update schedule for new novels be very long?I mean, SOA itself takes quite a long time to update, so............... You know

Bro... I have no words. This is masterpiece.

It already feels amazing and I don't know what the author have in his big brain for this story. Great start for the story author 😁

I don't know what to say. depressing mc just saying that he deserves to dire. confusing plot, just getting pain and hate by others with his own will. I don't want to read it anymore . Some people are saying that it's good, perfect but I don't feel like that. Harem tag but just pushing girls away from it and instead of starting again he is just stuck with his girlfriend like bro we know it hits hard but you have just given up in life. if you want to die alone just suicide again, you don't even want to use the new opportunity.

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I enjoyed the story at first but it became way too complicated for me. There are too many mysterious characters to keep track. Too much jumping around in perspectives and times. Too much unexplained stuff to care. I skip this one and try the next novel the author makes.

at the start of the book it was excellent and i would have considerd it a masterpiece if it wasn't for the mc who had no good character development from what i can see he is too wimpy and edgy at times he needs character development and not be pathetic that he will lose some hitches.other then that its totally awesome.

I feel like when writing a "tragic" story like this wn you need a few special things. A plot that makes sense and can properly explain why all the world is like that. And a mc who either goes to the dark edgy path and tries to stay away from the cast or an mc who actively tries to do the right thing in a wrong broken world. This novel's mc is somewhere along the middle of that and so far he's pretty unlikeable, emotional but stays away from his past relationships, knows about the future yet keeps doing things that are contrary to his safety and his goals. So here we have a half-baked mc who I can't stand reading, the world has also been largely unexplained with little intrigue and mystery. Most info is just dumped to u with little to no explanation.

I want him to get stronger and kill his mother as soon as possible. And if possible, let all his friends know everything he went through and make them regret it. I don't like it when asariah is in pain and no one around her notices. I feel like crying instead 😭😭😭

since there are only a few chapters , i can't be certain about the review but for me the story is progressing slowly,and it's not good enough to keep me reading

Reading till the end of the free chapters i am not happy with the pace and story so far. mc is weak af, everyone hates him and he still is not in the training phase. for 40+ chapters it just feels like a prolouge and i have to say it, i just wasted my time in hope that the mc does something good. the are 10+ characters and everyone hates him. he does nothing to correct it. he just gets beating up. no romance and mc is so bad and game focused that he ihnores anything. honestly its too mich of a waste to wait for the plot to have a good moment about mc. everything is negative, he get broken bones every 5 chapters. people trash talk him every 2 chapters. bro why did i even hope that the author will put something good here?

First, i was bamboozled by the character description of MC mother. The one where it says She is Azariah guardian angel make me misunderstood their relationship. So for you so it didn't happen again what i can say is his mother is a real villain. Not a soft one but a hardcore one. The novel is riddled with mystery and drama, it will be explained slowly as the story go. I'm not really a fan of it but i still like it and will read it. When reading thus i was confuses from so many angles, i was only can cleared some of my confusion when he contracy with El For MC he is really an unstable guy. His emotions is a mess, his mind is a mess, his body is a mess, even his memory is a mess. Maybe author will explain it further down in the story but, right now he is more like a transmigrator than a reincarnator. He is more like a two person living in the same body, and right now we read him more as Azariah than Inder. He was like a person having 2 diiferent personality. Author didn't really explained much about the world background aside when he narates thing from what MC knew from the game. lastly I knew i was stupid for asking this... but how did really MC get to bod with seedlings of world tree(Niflhm? He said when someone try to bond with it their soul will freeze, but just because he looses 1/3 rd of his soul he can do it? if we have a water even if it was less isn't it still a water?

honestly decent writing, if your not very good with cruelty to yourself, depression and hate abuse this story isn't for you, i myself am not in a great mental state and tried reading this and the extreme amounts of cruelty from people around him and his cruelty to his self just turned me off from the story cause of how extreme it is. not to mention 90+ chapters in and all these people hate him and for 95% of them you don't even actually know why. author will probably get to it eventually but i don't have the patience or mental energy to read to that point. good writing cause of the amount of emotion it makes you feel but besides that the story itself just runs a bit to slow for me and the premise of it is just a turn off

The pace of the story is just right. At first it was just focusing on his survival. But as the story is going on other things are also coming into focous like oliver and mc's friendship, his relationship with christina and the best part part is that the transition of his thaught process from just focousing on his survival to slowly shifting for their well being and him wanting to be with them and it fells just natural and not at all forced. The character development very good. The which i like the most is the blend in personality of azharia and Inder. At one moment we see the story from azharia's eyes his pain, his grief, his loneliness, his need for affection and at the same his rational side stopping him from getting close to people. He is ready to sacrifice himself for his loved ones . And on the opposite side we have inder who is ready to sacrifice anything and anyone for his freedom. No doubt my favorite thing in this story is the struggle between his inner self and the interaction between characters. Everyone has their own problems, our mc is not tge only one who is talented almost everyone has a type of trump card of themselves which can the mc a run for his money. Last but not the least the main villain our dear mc's mother who loves him very much. A barrier which seems impossible to overcome. One who always seems to be 10 steps ahead. A spider whose web is big it seems impossible to escape. All of this components come together make the stoey alive. I would recommend everyone to at least try this story onece and read to 30th chapter before making a decision