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Percy Jackson: Son Of Artemis(Complete)

作者: TheGodSage
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"I don't want much... Just my mother... or... at least know who she is... if she cares... can I find that at Camp Half-Blood?... then sign me up..." I own nothing but my OC's and plotlines... Also, Mc Doesn't know that he's Artemis's son for a long time The cover isn't mine, Hope you enjoy it! Read on Patréon! Patr0n.com/GodSage

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1 :1
2 :Volume 2
3 :Volume 3

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-around 1230 letters worth of 'eh' level criticism ahead- skip to the bottom for a one sentence summary of what I'm ranting about. [warning, I have pretty high standards] Good idea but none of the characters act like real people, mc accepts things way too easy (not skeptical enough) random guy rocks up and tells him that he teaches special children and invites mc to his school, what does mc do? he blindly trusts said guy and let's guy bring him alone, into a forest. would any person who isn't brain dead would suspect something. the characters act so inconsistent, one second the mc is an abused child, but now he's some social butterfly. all of the immediate and long term consequences are ignored, this takes away the weight of actions that have been committed, like someone being punched in the face but there is and will be no bruise or concussion, just straight back into the fight. this story lacks reason, like it was put out just because, the story may be thought out, but the personality of the characters is fluid and changes to whatever is convenient for the story. DON'T DROP THE STORY just because I don't like this, I've seen too many authors drop their work just because 5 out of 100 people don't like it use any criticism given to improve. just because this isn't for me doesn't mean it isn't for someone else. this story lacks realism (how people act and behave etc...) otherwise, 'pretty OK' on the scale of 'I can't read this without poking my eyes out' to 'I can't look at. anything other than this book rn' readable, but definitely not professional grade, has room to improve

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