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One Piece: The Navy Traitor

作者: RainHR
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In the dark depths of Impel Down, Alaric, an enigmatic twenty-nine-year-old former vice admiral, has been locked away for over a decade. With a history shrouded in mystery and a will that defies time, he has endured confinement in the world's most feared prison, waiting for the perfect moment to claim his freedom. When opportunity presents itself in the form of a daring infiltration led by the infamous Monkey D. Luffy, Alaric is faced with a crucial choice. Alaric must seize every moment to escape and defy his fate. In a rapidly changing world, his release could be the spark that ignites a new era. I am not a native English speaker, it is my third language, this is a Spanish story written by me in my spare time. The characters do not belong to me except my Mc. All rights belong to the creator of the work Oda

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Ayush_Dixit_4550
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This Fanfic Perfect Please Update Regularly

BPVVI
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It’s like an AJ wrote it or should I say chatgbt

ThomenV
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Perfect story, so far an interesting Mc, with a lot of charisma and a little sarcastic. Devil Fruit with a lot of potential. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

RainHR
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Fulfilling the tradition of all authors, shameless promotion [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Nicopox
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Peak ..... ............ .. .. ........

Inevitable_End
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This Fanfic has potential, if it is updated regularly then it will be definitely top tier. Keep it up Author.👍🏻

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Fraisier
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The mc is a simp [img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

MonkeMonke
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i had a whole review written out but then my phone glitched and got rid of it all so I guess your getting this

daniel_urieta
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Snake_Empress
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Good story. please keep up the good work.

ponysha
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Nice nuce nute nace nate nare niro nito nato? tato wato gato menato tato to bato mato chato gato abato vato sato hato iato kota toka aka da kda

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