Petal Out of Time by tabnis on fiction.live RWBY

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Synopsis

Your mother's name is Ruby Rose. She's also dead, until she wasn't

Time travel, you discover, is very weird. 

                                                                                                                            Review by penguenjoyer

                                                              An excellent quest i'd heavily recommend, but not for reasons common on this site The worldbuilding and plot are both decent, but certainly not something i haven't seen before. Same goes for the setting, your typical RWBY quest with a... small twist A small twist yeah, that turned out to be excellent for one simple reason. Amazing character writing. It is my solemn opinion that all aspects of a story can be however good you want, but if you can't write compelling characters you're never going to breathe life into any of your writing This quest is not lacking in 'life'. Excellent characters have resulted in amazing emotional scenes that have had me thoroughly enjoy reading this. The scenes are balanced with some levity from both the QM and chat (who i think have done a great job guiding the quest along) to make sure we're not drowning in angst all the time The dialogue too has been excellent, so it's always a treat to have new developments in the quest. Overall, i can't help but give 5 stars for what has been an excellent work.                                                                  Review by fourpartharmony                                                            Without a doubt, the best RWBY quest on this site. All the characters are in character and the lack of smut actually allows some great character interactions that aren't just 'say whatever they want to hear so we can fuck them quicker'.

I'd like to request some more Zwei battle shenanigans, please.