Naruto Taught By Aizen (TL)

劇透

The amount of wuxia terminology made this ff look like another Chinese novel that was not translated well at all. The plot of this story contains many holes which made it difficult to understand what is going on at times.

A Tl, thx man. 5/5 5/5 5/5...................................................................................................................................................

Rating this on ch. 17. It's pretty good from a translated mtl. The stories great and I love how they've modified Naruto's character in the story. The only issue is that there are a few inaccuracies the Author got wrong in the Naruto world but they aren't very frequent so the can be looked over. The story itself is good and the grammar's alright and isn't perfect but it's better than most mtl's. There are a few Chinese sayings that are a bit hard to understand but you can just ignore them or convert them into a different but similar saying.

It bro this book is fire bro Naruto becoming like aizen like I would never thought someone would make a book about this like its a!along the way you set the story it's just amazing I wish you luck I hope you get the attention you need so this book can become famous

l like it very much, keep it going and try to correct the he and she in the sentences, it sometimes ruins the flow of my reading.so far very good

So far so good author! Great unique take, and good writing. I’m excited to see where you take this story.