Naruto: Rebirth in the Ninja World

This is, what you may think, the famous, Author Review. Here, in short I would like to answer some questions people may have before reading. 1. No, I did not put the tags wrong, there is NOT going to be any harem. 2. Romance is not the main focus of this story. 3. Everything in here has a reason for it to happen, nothing is happening without any connection in future. So if you can, trust me through some absurd things in between. 4. I have considered about the emotional approach of the MC a lot more. I have tried to portray him as a normal human who isn't perfect and may need help from his friends. 5. He is no goody-two shoes or the Hokage's dog. MC could give lesser f's about Konoha. He only stays here and defends it since his mother lives there and he loves her a lot. (A normal mother-son love. Don't ask that question) 6. As for the relations, those who have already read it in the previous work, please do not spoil it for the new ones (If there are any). 7. Lastly, Yup, Naruto will indeed take birth but not as the MC's son. 8. Ask me any other questions you have in the comment section in chaps, here or on my discord. Username is given in the story description.

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Oh my God, there is no harem. I love you because there is no harem I will begin with the readers now, but 5 stars for you because there is no harem

What's the point of timeskip when you make 5,6 chapter's explaining the skip😐 Gfdudhgfgyggyhgggghyyghhgghhgghhgggghhhhggghhhhgghhhffhh

Writing quality is decent but template system power scaling is always a little flawed and limits character development. But if you like template system fics, then give this a read, as it is better than most.

Second review to counter act the first guy's three star lol

Just gotta say. It is too forced. Mc's Mother dies because he is too stupid. There was a lot of way to save her but mc needed his character development...

The third review, copying the 2nd to counter 1st review.

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using this review to counter the fake reviews cause this book is not bad..................................................................................

i find this boring . i couldn't attach to the MC . i dropped this twice and in two days . now i don't remember anything about the story

I really didn't like this book. It was just barely good enough to keep reading until the end and nothing really changes from the original story. The templates were not explored well and neither was his mother's clan. I think you should stop writing this and just start something new.

Ima be honest here and say this. I may seem like I'm putting a review in here really early, afterall, I'm only 2 chapters in, but, there is just one thing I had to put in here that the author keeps doing. Please...PLEASE stop repeating your words so much. This is just advice from a fellow writer(although I don't really publish) and put some more personality into your characters. From what I can see, they're just generic with a basic face. What I mean by that is, for example, Yukan, the MC, is a bit flat and for the beginning of your story, that ain't a good sign. He has the all round, cliché sad backstory and even though he has a system, I feel that he's not really utilizing and exploring much of it...first of all, how did he get the template?(Probably explained later, right?) Second, another useful tip I learned, stop extending your paragraphs and sentences. There are way to many unnecessary words put into it, and rather than interesting, it makes it tedious to read. If you put into your sentence "Konoha was at peace once the battle was over" you don't need to continue adding afterwards 'The children were running around in happiness after the war ended.' It's repetitive and both still give off the same message, just in different words.

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Я просто не могу читать дальше... 78 глав, я читал с большим трудом. Герой очень... пассивный? В общем не пытается. Он мог бы стать медиком... что за ерунда с талантом? Просто трудись и все... нет он полагается на систему. Вообще система это самый большой минус этого фанфика. был бы странный геном они было бы лучше, как и мечник, нет ничего что нельзя было сделать в рамках силы мира Наруто. Но самое плохое было в непонятном ориентировании на героя злодеев. Данзо психопат, а этого НЕ БЫЛО в каноне. Он был лживым но не убийцей своих без КРАЙНЕЙ необходимости. Учихи готовили переворот в деревне... конечно он решит их уничтожить, это логично. Но это не было поступком психопата, он был высокомерным идиотом с жаждой власти но не психом!

Honest review 5 stars author is not english so give him a break on the grammar, and the writing is good the only downside is the super slow template, understand if author nerfed it due to kijin physique but it feels like it wont develop until 200 chaps later but i do hope its not like that because it would be nice if he unlocks other templates too.

Votre fanfic est plein d'incohérence et de faute dans l'intrigue, tout d'abord minato et kushina et les autre de leurs génération ont obtenu leurs diplôme de ninja pendant la 2nd grande guerre shinobi et y'ont participer , à la fin je pence qu'il sont devenu jonin ou chunin je ne m'en souviens plus , et ma chronologie à laquelle vous est celle ou kakashi est à l'académie je pense , votre fanfic serai si vous commencez par corriger cette incohérence dans la chronologie , après je n'ai lu que quelques chapitres pour savoir que c'est épouvantable surtout avec le défaut de la chronologie , franchement vous avez beaucoup de chose qui ont besoin d'être corrigé

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This is your second attempt to correct the inconsistencies from the last fic you wrote and lemme tell you that you absolutely blew it. I suggest you to find another hobby or passion cuz writing stories is bot for you

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