Naruto: Lustful Ascension System
An otaku is reborn as Naruto Uzumaki, equipped with a powerful Lustful Ascension System that grants strength through forbidden desires. Free from Konoha’s rules, Naruto embarks on a bold journey to conquer hearts, master new powers, and reshape the ninja world. A thrilling, taboo-filled adventure where lust unlocks unstoppable strength! It's an alternate world, not all rules of the original Naruto series apply here. Warning- Milfs/Wincest/Lots of Smut/Travelling/Wish Fulfillment/Kinky https://discord.gg/k8repZDUgf Here is the discord Server
Question [Not a Chapter]
Since I have written 10 chaps, which I had honestly doubted I would, I want to ask a few things as you are the few readers I have here.
What do you think about the fanfic so far? Is it good? is it bad? any recommendation for improving it?
Another question- How is the tone of the fanfic seemed to you guys? I'm thinking about whether to tone down the smut part or not. As you have read, there are quite a few lemon chapters in them without anything fully happening.
Another question, which bothers me quite a bit is this- Do you guys think the pace of the novel is too slow or just right?
And you can leave some suggestion here