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My Master Keeps Breaking Through On The Verge Of Death

作者: Pork 200 Pounds
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"Master, I'm sorry... It's all my fault that you could not break through before your last moments." "Don't worry, my disciple. I will not die," said Xu Fan as he smiled at his disciple, whose face was covered with tears. “If only… If only I could get you a few more Foundation Establishment Pills..." The genius of the sect knelt on the floor while crying like a baby. Xu Fan looked at his oldest disciple and sighed. He then took out a Foundation Establishment Pill and nonchalantly threw it into his mouth. The next second, divine lights of five different colors filled the world.

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Read it until around chapter 100 in the raws. Slow story. This is certainly not a xianxia power rush. As another commenter as said, this is more like a slice of life novel. Some things to note: Just the fact that the MC's first major cultivation level has needed dozens of chapters to breakthrough should give the reader the right expectancy. The plot is the usual for this type of novel so don't expect great originality. The writing cannot be considered very good, but it is way above what we poor mortals are usually been fed in this site. The author seem to have done some little research about what he is talking about and not just spiting completely random BS just because it looks cool. Some characters are not just zero dimensional and could actually menace to reach 1 dim. In particular the MC. The author has managed to use all the tired and overtried chinese webnovel MC pseudo characteristics but managed to make them blend into something of a silhouette of a human being. That is a real achievement. This also means that our MC is not a copy of schwarzenegger's terminator. Unfortunately this also means that there are irritating situations and characters that hinder our easy reading flow. Some because of the way this caricature of a world influence its beings, and some just because the author is not that good at humor as needed in those cases. Note that this not mean that this story doesn't have humor. On the contrary. There is plenty of soft and even subtle humor, which is appropriate for a slice of life type of story. ... This author gives the feel of someone who is on its way to be a very capable professional writer, but only the future can tell. All in all this novel is readable and, given our drought of good books to read, might even deserve a 4 stars rating from me.

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