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Deine_Mudfa
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2022-04-18 10:32

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Deine_Mudfa
Deine_MudfaLv1

And you failed in Logic I think. Like what has this to do with my Review and consider that I was chapter 12 when posting this Review your whole screenshot makes no sense. Seeing how cringe the whole thing with the girl was do you really think I read till she goes in a journey with her Master. That has nothing to do with your Reply

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Deine_Mudfa
Deine_MudfaLv1

*....That has nothing to do with your Reply towards my Review

Deine_Mudfa:And you failed in Logic I think. Like what has this to do with my Review and consider that I was chapter 12 when posting this Review your whole screenshot makes no sense. Seeing how cringe the whole thing with the girl was do you really think I read till she goes in a journey with her Master. That has nothing to do with your Reply
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Deine_MudfaLv1

Yeah that's why the long reply... Becouse I am not worth time HhahahhahahahahhahaHhhahahah

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BlackFan
BlackFanLv5

Read it until around chapter 100 in the raws. Slow story. This is certainly not a xianxia power rush. As another commenter as said, this is more like a slice of life novel. Some things to note: Just the fact that the MC's first major cultivation level has needed dozens of chapters to breakthrough should give the reader the right expectancy. The plot is the usual for this type of novel so don't expect great originality. The writing cannot be considered very good, but it is way above what we poor mortals are usually been fed in this site. The author seem to have done some little research about what he is talking about and not just spiting completely random BS just because it looks cool. Some characters are not just zero dimensional and could actually menace to reach 1 dim. In particular the MC. The author has managed to use all the tired and overtried chinese webnovel MC pseudo characteristics but managed to make them blend into something of a silhouette of a human being. That is a real achievement. This also means that our MC is not a copy of schwarzenegger's terminator. Unfortunately this also means that there are irritating situations and characters that hinder our easy reading flow. Some because of the way this caricature of a world influence its beings, and some just because the author is not that good at humor as needed in those cases. Note that this not mean that this story doesn't have humor. On the contrary. There is plenty of soft and even subtle humor, which is appropriate for a slice of life type of story. ... This author gives the feel of someone who is on its way to be a very capable professional writer, but only the future can tell. All in all this novel is readable and, given our drought of good books to read, might even deserve a 4 stars rating from me.

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