MHA: Code

I'm the author, of course, I'm going to give myself the best review. I try to be as grammatically correct as possible and make sure it's easy to read. This one is going to be great, it's my most planned FF, I started writing this one 2 years ago, constantly rewriting it, think it's ready. Give it a chance and write a comment or review. Cya 🍺🐼

Pretty trashy chuuni fanfic lol. If you like reading about disgruntled characters in a world of young masters, this novel is for you. Dunno what else to say.

Peak Fanfic Autism Don't read if you're looking to immerse yourself in a MHA fanfic. The Author tries his best to break your immersion in any possible way he can He inserts his dumb comments every other paragraph, as if his readers care about what he thinks while they're reading his already unreadable fanfic. Author also introduces characters that are too out of place in the MHA world instead of using an OC or already existing MHA characters. Ofc, this idiocy extends to his MC who displays the author's lack of respect for the world he's basing his fanfic on. I doubt this 14yo author who has never read anything that isn't a crudely made fanfic would do MHA's plot justice. Definitely a hazard for anyone who doesn't want to lose braincells.

I think it's a great idea well your brain being fast as a super computer in itself is OP with the things you can create the increase in reaction time IQ etc but i think it was not implented very well because those things i typed up above doesn't really hlappen i mean he can literally connect to internet and learn everything humanity has to offer he should be able to do something right? Wrong. He mostly acts like a chunni teenager that's bipolar and as far as i can see he doesn't really have a goal either just cardboard MC not to mention author couldn't really make things interesting despite the things he could do one problem i could point out is that he is restricting his own imagination of what can happen and cannot like c'mon your character is in a world of a green haired kid becoming a hero and saving the day you should be able to do better than that

This was a great novel until he killed the hero. The tag said that he was an anti-hero, but really he’s a straight up villain. Author please change that so he doesn’t kill heroes, only villains. Maim, loss of body parts, and knocking heroes out is great. But once he became a villain I lost interest because his character changed out of no where and I thought he was going to be an anti hero, not someone who kills for convenience because he doesn’t want to wait a little. You could make it so he just sucks most of the blood out of his body but doesn’t kill them. If your going to have the MC be a real villain, don’t say that this is an antihero fic

This fanfiction is for those people who ignore details. For those people who prefer logic and realistic development, this is not for you. For reference the 6 year old MC defeats 14 year olds; and the only explanation we get is fast reflexes, and quick learning. The writer thinks programing is easy and with 1 year of self learning one can make a human shaped robot to do martial arts flawlessly and better then humans. Not to mention the Mindset of ' Skill defeats strength'. Real world is different thats why combat sports have weight class.

I think this can go somewhere like the story slow but interesting good quirk, with lots of potential keep it up DONT DROP

Well this is going to be a review for this fanfiction. Do keep in mind, this was only done at the point where I read up to the latest chapter, so yeah. For writing quality, there are quite the number of grammatical errors within the work, whether it be completely different words used or incorrect spelling, it can be remedied, I understand that much. The story development, it's understandable but this is coming from me, so don't take it as gospel, I honestly think that it's a little too fast paced? It's odd with it's speed sometimes and I'm less of a time-skippy guy, so yeah. The MC is an odd guy, very pragmatic to the point where he's sometimes even rude to people that he's close to, that's understandable it's an anti hero. But just because you skin people alive because they slaughtered a box of puppies, does not completely mean that you have to let those around you get affected by your mood. Updates are decently often, and they're of okay size. And the world is MHA with decently expounded building to it to give it a little bit more spice. Overall, and this is more of a subjective, it's an pretty okayish fic, could definitely use improvement and proofreading, but it's still not that bad. I would probably recommend it to somebody who's desperate to look for something new to read.

Overall, a pretty meh story. I liked the concept, but too much repetition, and not enough actual development. Also, there are the pretty typical "quickly overpowered," and "I'm the best" themes.

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The main character is so stupid. Going into crazy efforts to obtain blood as if he couldn't simply buy it off the black market. It hurts to see someone misusing their powers this badly.

Grammar isn't great and all characters other than MC are made to be stupid so that the MC seems better in comparison. If you have nothing else to read then this is doable but it should not be a first pick.

Looks quite amazing honestly, as we see in this story that our dear MC isn't a dimwitted babbling bambling baboon, trying to stay with even more idiotic main cast for a vain and an unrealistic goal in the most cliché kind of stories "good against evil". No, our MC is someone with brains and cunning, someone who treads carefully his path and power and leaves nothing to the unreasonable notion of luck that most authors falls to so their MC can have an accidental convenient power up, our dear protagonist work research and work hard jyst to get notion of success making the story more realistic, and all that for cause we can all agree upon, to "live happily ever after ", and he will stop at nothing to achieve his goal.

This is one of those stories you have to turn off your brain to enjoy. . MC makes the most dumb, most stupid, most idiotic & brain-dead decisions one could make. And because this written like a Chinese novel where the author makes everyone else dumber than the m.c. to compensate for his lack of brain cells. . And the pseudo science is so atrocious that someone who barely passed highschool would start throwing up by the mind boggling level of mistakes & straight up false statements. . We don't even know what his quick does. Author doesn't lay it down clearly. (Not as a mistery setup, but he straight up has no idea what it is). There are no rules or limitations to his quick i.e. he can do whatever he wants. . M.c. actions look like he is desperately trying to get caught. He mixes up his personas (civilian & villain) , has no forethought, and he evolves his "technopathy" quick to turning into a lion. And NOBODY BATS AN EYE. . At this point I gotta think his real quick is [stupidity domain] - anyone who sees or hears about him get a drastic reduction in their intelligence.

Starts out very good but the MC quickly becomes well known for being super powerful and by that I mean nationally and even globally to the point that he can even fight All Might 1v1 to a stand still and after that happens he suddenly starts the hero school story line... as in the super well known powerful MC does all the "tests" to qualify for the Hero job... basically 50% of the story is just about the MC showing of and following the plot. The MC becomes the 3rd wheel of the story.

here to balance all the negative reviews it's actually a good book.

its good above average grammar but what I like is that the mc doesn't care about plot he just does his own thing and he doesn't hide the fact that he is stronger than kids his age and use the attention he gets for benefits I have lots of mha ff where the mc "acts" lowkey because they don't want to attract attention that's so dumb and a huge turn off for me fortunately this is different so if you like a ff where the mc doesn't care about plot doesn't help the original mc and becomes a babysitter and doesn't "act" lowkey then you are at the right place

OMG, I just finished this! It was soo~ good. So much planning and plots our MC did. Plots within plots within plots y’all! Like, for real! MC is awesome. I feel like he didn't want just one of anything so he chose both or all... whether he was neutral, with the law, or against it. Women too! Go MC! And thank you author for providing us unworthy readers with this beauty. And the ending is perfect. It toes all the loose ends and leaves room for a sequel to grow if desired too! Thanks again for this journey...

I really loved this story to the very end.!

It was one of my favorite novels with Mc that is focused and hungry for power. romance with momo is passable, Rumi is tolerable ,but adapting eri? This is too cliche. Once again eri catches everyone's heart. It ruins the story. Mc should have devoured eri and her power. Maybe he adapted her because of some big scheme? I hope so because this is getting worse.