I'm the author, of course, I'm going to give myself the best review. I try to be as grammatically correct as possible and make sure it's easy to read. This one is going to be great, it's my most planned FF, I started writing this one 2 years ago, constantly rewriting it, think it's ready. Give it a chance and write a comment or review. Cya 🍺🐼

Peak Fanfic Autism Don't read if you're looking to immerse yourself in a MHA fanfic. The Author tries his best to break your immersion in any possible way he can He inserts his dumb comments every other paragraph, as if his readers care about what he thinks while they're reading his already unreadable fanfic. Author also introduces characters that are too out of place in the MHA world instead of using an OC or already existing MHA characters. Ofc, this idiocy extends to his MC who displays the author's lack of respect for the world he's basing his fanfic on. I doubt this 14yo author who has never read anything that isn't a crudely made fanfic would do MHA's plot justice. Definitely a hazard for anyone who doesn't want to lose braincells.

I think it's a great idea well your brain being fast as a super computer in itself is OP with the things you can create the increase in reaction time IQ etc but i think it was not implented very well because those things i typed up above doesn't really hlappen i mean he can literally connect to internet and learn everything humanity has to offer he should be able to do something right? Wrong. He mostly acts like a chunni teenager that's bipolar and as far as i can see he doesn't really have a goal either just cardboard MC not to mention author couldn't really make things interesting despite the things he could do one problem i could point out is that he is restricting his own imagination of what can happen and cannot like c'mon your character is in a world of a green haired kid becoming a hero and saving the day you should be able to do better than that

This was a great novel until he killed the hero. The tag said that he was an anti-hero, but really he’s a straight up villain. Author please change that so he doesn’t kill heroes, only villains. Maim, loss of body parts, and knocking heroes out is great. But once he became a villain I lost interest because his character changed out of no where and I thought he was going to be an anti hero, not someone who kills for convenience because he doesn’t want to wait a little. You could make it so he just sucks most of the blood out of his body but doesn’t kill them. If your going to have the MC be a real villain, don’t say that this is an antihero fic

This fanfiction is for those people who ignore details. For those people who prefer logic and realistic development, this is not for you. For reference the 6 year old MC defeats 14 year olds; and the only explanation we get is fast reflexes, and quick learning. The writer thinks programing is easy and with 1 year of self learning one can make a human shaped robot to do martial arts flawlessly and better then humans. Not to mention the Mindset of ' Skill defeats strength'. Real world is different thats why combat sports have weight class.

I think this can go somewhere like the story slow but interesting good quirk, with lots of potential keep it up DONT DROP

Well this is going to be a review for this fanfiction. Do keep in mind, this was only done at the point where I read up to the latest chapter, so yeah. For writing quality, there are quite the number of grammatical errors within the work, whether it be completely different words used or incorrect spelling, it can be remedied, I understand that much. The story development, it's understandable but this is coming from me, so don't take it as gospel, I honestly think that it's a little too fast paced? It's odd with it's speed sometimes and I'm less of a time-skippy guy, so yeah. The MC is an odd guy, very pragmatic to the point where he's sometimes even rude to people that he's close to, that's understandable it's an anti hero. But just because you skin people alive because they slaughtered a box of puppies, does not completely mean that you have to let those around you get affected by your mood. Updates are decently often, and they're of okay size. And the world is MHA with decently expounded building to it to give it a little bit more spice. Overall, and this is more of a subjective, it's an pretty okayish fic, could definitely use improvement and proofreading, but it's still not that bad. I would probably recommend it to somebody who's desperate to look for something new to read.

Overall, a pretty meh story. I liked the concept, but too much repetition, and not enough actual development. Also, there are the pretty typical "quickly overpowered," and "I'm the best" themes.

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