Master Of My Universe: The Author Who Became the Hero's System

Amazing book, the first chapter would keep you hooked to the plot. the story development is really good and there's never a dull moment. great work author ♥️

the story is good overall, if you want something classic I highly recommend it. the author put a lot of time into this book, and it's clear. Just needs more substance in the world building department. 10/10 will continue to read, and good luck to the author.

this is so good and intresting how can a human write this fantastic novel howw?

So... following the traditional custom all authors follow, I'm reviewing my own goddamn book. And a 5 star at that(don't want my rating going down). So, if you, my guy, want an MC, who is SMART, SMARTER THAN YOUR PHYSICS TEACHER, who tackles enemies with his brain and magical power, you stumbled upon the right place. Remirg Kryptos is a man of culture and you will obviously raise your eyebrows in disappointment when you read about his uncanny decisions. Simple though they seem. THE OTHER MC, WHO AS USUAL, is a broken guy reincarnated in another world... knows everything blah blah blah... Now I won't spit everything out, so go and read the goddamn book!

It's a good read so far; the world background is still a bit vague, but maybe it is due to me still being in the early chapters. Story development is well-paced, but writer, you have to increase updating stability. Except for that, this is a story that has potential if properly written.

This is some good shit bro. The author really cooked.

The start of this novel is interesting which hooked me in but it might be considered slow for some people...but for me it's fine. The system/simulator is an interesting take on the rpg genre...I know many books who had started but not able to execute the premise well...but till now the book is going OK so far by keeping everything in balance. Hope the author continues writing the story and not give up.

This truly is... our Mogambo Khush Hua... a lil rushed but got heart

The main characters are interesting from what I've read, the world building shows promise of been extremely deep, and the plot is exciting. All in all, I am very excited to read further!

劇透

I'd say that the pacing is too slow and everything is very unnecessarily detailed. But as it is a fantasy novel it's a good trait. I would say I would like to give the novel a chance and see how the story goes.

A good novel. Although the world background is still a bit vague, i liked the concept and im really hoping to get a good plot and a cool mc... in any case... release more chap author...!

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劇透

Good work author, O like the cliffhangers on the end of each chapter. Keeps me hooked up

It is a good book. Me as a broke and a newbie at wn likes it. Wanna see it becomes greater.

Starts with slice of life then the same old idea: tragedy scene comes in. And then boom MC gets into a transmigration but the new thing is MC is not the MC anymore. And there's a twist the new MC gets himself into dungeon clearing but he doesn't level up but goes down instead. MC brilliantly clearing some puzzling trials in some clever ways. Sometimes Author writing in the POV of author feels a bit funny but the writing quality is decent. If you are a fan of novels with MC clearing mentally challenging trials with wits, try this one.