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marvel_away5 months ago發表Princess Meera (outside palace without cloak)
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Pictures for novel Amer Palace
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Sisodiniji Damyanti Deiji
- marvel_away5 months ago發表
This is an good read by Web novel standard. The development of world background is unique that any reader would get sucked into it..I would like to continue read the next chapters and I hope the author does not give up. All the best
- marvel_away7 months ago發表
I think you really need an editor. Even if your story is good, the problem is that if you are not able to convey what you as an author is trying tell the readers through the use of words, than everything is for nothing.
- marvel_away7 months ago發表
The novel is interesting to read where the main focus is to conquer as many woman as possible. Till now story has progressed in a smooth pace. The character design is generic except for the caveat that it has an interesting system. the world background is also stable according to my senses in this type of stories.
