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Living life in Naruto relaxed. (I am Egotistical though.)

作者: FrozenTide
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First off this is no where near like its cannon. Apparently the fact that is fan fiction people ignore really. You will not see your characters with there same personality. It would not make any sense with all the different exposure people have happen. The mc had a part of himself around way before the start of the series. He was an adult when Kushina left the village of whirlpool. There are added characters that change the world and how you may have read. Some things still happen, because why wouldnt they. Events can still take place how they would before. It may be worst or better. The concept of the ripple effect or butterfly effect are just concepts. Think Final destination. death finds away or in this case the deities will find a way. The story picks when Naruto is two years old. The timeline does not fit at all because I have included parts of the movies and the like. Also there is the ability dimension travel. As well as there are deity at work. This will not fit with society norms. Big shocker there. The fact you would think it was is ridiculous since Naruto is about children going to war. Something that a lot of people ignore. The fact that they are kids killing people tends to get glossed over.. a lot. If you want to see your characters as they always are, just read the original. There is no point in you reading a fan-fic. "So first wish... Kryptonian Body. Second wish...Genius intellect to figure out techniques. Third Wish.. the ability to summon random people and things." "Eh, don't really care for anything else. Feel free to grant what you feel. I'm kinda just gonna do nothing unless trouble comes knocking." The God.. just stared. "Funny thing about that, I am a God of fertility.. so you have to breed and make kids. Like a lot. A lot a lot. You are hyper fertile. Like by x3 one for each wish." The God smirked. "I will also bestow on you the ability to move through dimensions and control of your body's cells and to that extent a little bit of others." The God said with a smile before sending Kai-La away. DeviantArt Broken Shield by hoangphamvfx enjoy his picture work.

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Morning_Fragrance
Morning_FragranceLv14

Writing quality is basic, I started to binge read this and after awhile I saw nothing but forced ideas and contradictions of the main character. The grammar is bad but not too bad, there are a lot of misspellings that honestly make me think that the author is an eight year old. An example would be, "Think you." ??? Correction, it would be, "Thank you." Stability of updates, I honestly don't care. You write, you write. You post, you post. Story development is quite slow and shockingly when it's slow, it's still chaotic and all over the place. Reading this honestly seemed promising at first but it became a train wreck fast. Character design, I said earlier the mc is contradicting. A lot of characters are OOC. "Oreo," is honestly a pure question mark and sh*t stain of what the ****. World background? It's from Naruto and all you really have to do is follow the essential parts and not do some crazy sh*t because chances are, you're going to screw up. Very few can pull of crazy sh*t, you are definitely not one of them. Goodluck, hopefully one day you can write something better and I might see it.

5yr

Kurama_is_tsundere
Kurama_is_tsundereLv6

Had a great start the pace is a bit out of track but the plot is there kinda casual and OP MC but the author needs to flesh out the conversations between the MC and his prospective wives more. Show how he makes them fall for him. Currently the author is doing a good job of making the most of his plot. ** : good fanfic you have here work on it a bit and try to bring in a bit more comedy it would go well with your MC's casual character. Thanks for writing this novel and keep up the great work, i appreciate it. 😁👍

5yr
The_Lone_Wolf
The_Lone_WolfLv14

This seems interesting so I'm gonna try it and it's extra exp so I'm gonna write this review cuz I feel like it .... . . . fillers: . Bla bla ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba na na na na na na na na na na bananaaaaaaaa nanananannanananananann potato po po po po po po po po po po po po po po po po po ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta at ta ta ta ta to toto to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to

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GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv6

terrible writing OP MC tryna be plot armor for Naruto and Konoha village yuck... terrible writing OP MC tryna be plot armor for Naruto and Konoha village yuck... terrible writing OP MC tryna be plot armor for Naruto and Konoha village yuck...

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HHKing
HHKingLv14

Thank you for what you're writing. I'm sure the rest of the story will also keep me entertained.******************************************************

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snotra
snotraLv13

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DaoistEternalDream
DaoistEternalDreamLv11

Well i want to get xp so why not comment on a new fan-fic and give it a bit of help to get started. Good luck and i will add your story to my library.

5yr
STPRCOMMENDINGGIRL
STPRCOMMENDINGGIRLLv13

Dunno what to day buddy..!!! Can u make Onepiece Fanfic too Buddy??? Hope u make it... (づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ

4yr
Lustsifer
LustsiferLv13

Grammar: Safe and Readable. Update: Dunno, I am NEW here. Character: Safe, Not too Bad or too Good Story: It's Great, although I don't like some. But hey, not Anyone like what I like. World Building: So-So so far.

4yr
Xumit
XumitLv13

This is a good fanfic. But it's not the best as well. I always feel its kinda average 😂😅😂😂😂😂 😂😂😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂 😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂

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