House of the Rising Sun

劇透

MC gets turned into an Immortal and immediately tries to kill himself. After that doesn't work he sleeps for 800 years. The guy is a brainless Muppet. Probably one of the most baffling starts of any stories I have read. Why not just transfer him over directly to the 1800s if you dont want to write about an Immortal living through history?

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adding morgana ultimately ruined the potential of this story. dulling his morality. manufactured character change or growth is a weak writing tool and one I judge harshly. the story is unique but it seems to sacrifice quality for it. don't have to read more to see how convoluted and irrational the plot is at the moment and how the author will try and correct his actions later on. maybe if you tried rewriting this and excluding morgana because she's trash, then the story could be good.

It has a lot of promise but fails so many times. Every time he can use his powers to stop bas things he doesn't and thier is a new reason every time. i know you're trying not to make it boring, but it just makes him stupid and seems arrogant. No wonder everyone keeps trying to kill seth. he makes it seem like there are no repercussions for trying. He has had his loved ones kidnapped multiple times and just said all is fogiven or i cant use my full power to save her. LAME.

what type of vampire is if you don't get what I asking what vampire speices form what show or move or anime

one of the most entertaining fanfics I have ever read I hope this continues to the very end of the story