Hello everyone.
I know it's been a little while since I posted, and I'm sorry for that. I got really sick half way through August. Spent three weeks in the hospital, got released then two weeks later I was back in the hospital for a week. Luckily it wasn't the rona, though.
Anyway, during the last almost two months, I didn't really feel like writing, for obvious reasons, I think. I did, however, re-read what I had already posted. I read the comments, too. The conclusion I came to, I need to start over.
I like the idea of Senbonzakura's abilities showing up in DxD, and I like the fact that the main character is childhood friends with Rias and Sona. I also liked the little mini arc with Akeno. I felt pretty good about myself with that. They might need a little polish, though.
Other than that, the R.O.B. sequence (I had fun writing it, though), Sacred Gear choice, the deaths of the MC's parents, and the fact that he was okay with being someone's servant weren't that great as far as I'm concerned. I'm going full on AU for my next try. I'm thinking of bringing characters from other works... Not sure if that will happen or who will show up if it does, yet. But I'm going to try and do better. I'll try and be better from chapter to chapter. And I hope you all can help me with constructive criticism.
Thanks for the support so far, I'll post again when i start posting the new story.
SixthSense1029