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Harem System: Spending Money On Women For 100% Rebate!

[Ding!] [Cashback System Activation Requirement Met!] [System Binding In Progress...!] [System Successfully Linked!] [Spent $1,000. 10x Critical Hit. Earned $10,000. The money has been transferred to account XXX-XXX-XXX] [Spent at least $1,000 on a beautiful lady. Received 1 lottery ticket. Do you want to use it?] [YES][NO] Kyle was a man that has never had any luck in life and he was on the verge of ending it all after being fired from his minimum wage job due to a customer's complaint which turned out to be a lie but due to the customer being an attractive lady, no one believed Kyle. To make matters worse, he had to pay for the damages that was caused by the customer. Beautiful people, they had it easy, didn't they? This was his last step and he knew that he wouldn't see tomorrow as he searched for a river to throw himself in. He thought his mind finally broke as there was no explanation for the Cyan Screen that popped up as he clicked the [YES] button. [You have drawn Charm!] [Charm: There is nothing the user can't charm his way out of or into! The universe has blessed you with charisma!] "Hahaha! I must have lost my marbles..." Kyle muttered to himself but his phone soon rang out to show that he had a notification. And to his surprise, he saw $10,000 sitting in his account and his jaw dropped. "THIS IS FOR REAL!!!"

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Calista's Grief.

Certainly! Here's the proofread version with improved sentence structure and readability, while keeping the word count exactly at 1100:

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Kyle spent some time with Jane, but he couldn't stay there for too long since it was her workplace. He knew he had to leave soon before he caused her any trouble. Buying everyone a phone might have been a little overboard, but Kyle had a point to prove. A sort of unspoken contest, if you will—but in the end, Kyle emerged victorious as Mike was effectively put in his place.

Mike didn't like Kyle, but Kyle didn't care. After all, Mike couldn't make any meaningful contribution to Kyle's life. This was the perfect scenario, but Kyle knew it was time to go. Before leaving, he planted a gentle kiss on Jane's forehead. It was a small act, but it marked her as his, making it clear to everyone in the store that Jane was spoken for.