Fourth Sky: Puppeteer

The story has great potential, and I feel the author's hard work in writing this novel, the writing is fine, sure there's space for improvement like certain repeated words, you may use synonyms for that so on and so forth, overall I enjoyed reading I recommended this mostly to those who enjoy creatures thriller type of novel.

Hey! This is my first novel. Because English is not my native language, I am aware that I still have many shortcomings in grammar, writing techniques, and other areas. I hope you guys still able to enjoy it! Give me your feedback and comment on the shortcomings of my novel. Thank you so much!

at the beginning of the first 20 chapters the story was a bit boring, the story started to get interesting at the 30th chapter, I think this novel has a good future.

A promising plot and development. I'd say the few things are info overload. Sometimes I find my self getting a little lost with the descriptions of things because there's just so much technical information all at once. Grammar could be improved but I think the flow would be better as well once the info overload is sorted. Very promising, keep improving [img=recommend]

The writing is nice, although there is room for development, such as with certain repeated words that could be replaced with alternatives, etc. Overall, though, I enjoyed reading it, and I would especially recommend this to readers who prefer this kind of novel.

This is the first novel of this genre that I have ever read, and this actually made me interested in the storyline of this novel. Overall, I think this novel is good, but your writing technique should be improved. Keep it up! Good Luck![img=recommend]

Your story holds potential. I can see that you have a very clear image in your head of how your story looks and plays out, but due to a lack of rhythm in your writing, a protagonist that could be better developed, and repeated grammar and sentence structure mistakes, it fails to come across. Overall, I believe you can get there. You just have to keep practicing. You might want to consider hiring an editor, a least until your English improves. I wish you the best of luck!

Hello, first thing first, I was overwhelmed by how you tried to describe the world and it's system. I was confused and had to try to read it again. There aren't many grammatical errors but try not using repeated words. You have a great plot, but your world background and character design needs improvement.

I had to read it a lot of times to try and understand the world, so I'd say try to improve on it. But the quality of the writing is very good, which at least gives a better understanding of the book.

I love the storyline of this novel and how you to describe the world is quite good for me, but you must improve your writing technique and grammar overall, i like it!

The novel concept seem solid so far and I hope the author continues to develop the story. I've always been a fan of big world and world building, so I wish the author the best of luck!

Your story is nice. The Building of it is nice. I hope the author can continue his work more and make his dream successful. I again say, the story is good. May the stars align for him.

A pretty interesting read overall, the writing is quite awesome though everyone has space to improve. The plot and storyline is amazing to be honest so great job Author ^.^! [img=recommend][img=update]

The plot is astonishing, and the characters and the situations have been written very well, This book is full of surprises! Good work author! Best of luck

The concept is a unique one and from the title my guess is that MC will be a puppeteer/necromancer? This alone has gotten me hooked and from how far I've read the author writing is great. Am looking to read on this story as it's quite interesting.

Uww never read this kind of story before... Its kinda new to me and that's why l enjoyed reading it... Also l found the world background really cool... Author has really worked hard to build such a nice and unique story...All the best and keep writting...

nice plot and intriguing characters, over the story has great story and can't wait for more

interesting characters and world background and good plot

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this actually has a good idea, but there are still some shortcomings that need to be improved such as the storyline and the depiction of the world's background in this novel.