Freylingo

Keep it up!!! I am amazed that you just popped out of nowhere and dropped a bombshell on Webnovel. Never stop the great work darling. I am rooting for you!!

Another hit, the story is so well written that I can't help but be drawn in. This author know what he is doing and he doesn't hide it. The story is a little slow but I trust it will speed up.

My god do I love this novel. Fantasy is right up my alley but this out does anything else I've read. I hope to see great things from you author!

Like damn. I don't know what to even say. The writing quality is top notch, it creates very vivid images in your mind like a movie. The stability of updates is great also, more than one a day? I couldn't do that. I never thought I could picture such gruesome scenes in my head of what happened. Its true people really don't understand what people have to deal with on that kind of terrain. Its not excitement but fear. An anxiety that is instilled in your bones and lasts for many years after. I think this story has great potential!

Writing this as of Chapter 19 being published. The beginning of the story isn't going to be grand, it's the main character learning and mastering some spells. After the a few more chapters is where things start to get spicy. Blood, competition, love, criminals, power. Everything you could hope in a book starts a little later. I just wanted to establish the main character and make him be able to stand on the same stage as the power houses.

Missing the speech thing

The first chapter gives us all the information we need to understand the story. This year especially I have been more into this genre of story so I quite enjoyed being set up for what is to come. While the writing feels a little choppy, it is still of good quality and won't hinder you unless you are a big time critique. This story has potential to be really high up on the ranking and I hope the author continues to deliver wonderful chapters for us!

You used His face back to back

You used confirmed twice in the same paragraph, which isn't the end of the world.

SAO vibes lol