Fairy Tail : COLD HEART (ENG)

Hmm, the story is interesting, or rather very childish in which there is no seriousness, the first impressions that the author lays in the main character Gray are deceptive, in subsequent chapters we are revealed to be a conceited "princess" who reacts like a child to all interpersonal events in this story. The development of the power of persanage in the beginning was kind of worked out later, fell to a low grade of fan fiction. The interpersonal relationships between the characters are also contradictory, at the beginning the author shows them well-developed, but then it disappears and turns into some kind of obscenity without logic. In general, the works are clean, in general, this fan fiction is mediocre, it may even be slightly below average quality. I recommend it with beer. Well, better not.

idc how good the story is..the script style dialogue is such a turn off

劇透

Its too good.. i hope the author continue this..i read all the story the author made and every story is 5 star for me.

It's finally getting to the good part so please don't stop!!