Update; Character desing

GaZe_Zero gave me a great review, (ty men), and he told me that he liked the story but that the description of certain characters was missing. He was right and I promised him that I would do it, so, here is a description of the characters so far. There are still missing characters like the Cloud group that works for Hanako, Lucy's old companions, but when I introduce them properly into the story, I will do it.

Sora Inuzuka; has the features of both parents, having the general features of Johnny that make him look similar, with small differences, but those differences highlight the features of his mother, with a skin on his face being firmer and uniform, along with eyes that, although they resemble his father, are more acute and intimidating, making Sora possibly more attractive than his father when he grows up.

Judy Alvarez: although her physical appearance is the same as in the game but a much younger version of her, in which she had not shaved any part of her head yet, although she did have a similar haircut, was still brown without having dyed it yet. Her character has also deviated from the game, becoming more laid-back and cheerful. Judy knows this, and is deeply grateful for it to Sora, who is the person who helps her since she moved Nc, becoming her first real friend and the person she is in love with.

Aoi Hatake: from the Inuzuka family, Aoi is brunette, without gray hairs, appears to be younger than she is, has black eyes and possibly some camouflaged cybeware installed for crisis cases.

Author; you know the meme about Japanese women and how they age?, that they look young, look young, look mature, look mature, until they suddenly turn into avocados? Aoi is in the mature phase.

Musashi Hatake; former bodyguard of the head of the most important family in Japan, has gray hair due to his age and also a gray mustache, he lost one of his eyes in service, when he is in a safe environment he uses a normal patch to cover his missing eye and also partially lost his vision by deciding not to use any implant, instead when he needs it, he uses a patch with a small but powerful embedded computer, which gives him information in combat.

Author; when I was starting the story, I had planned to make Sora regain consciousness while Hanako and Musashi were talking, when Hanako, taught Sora to Musashi for the first time, when Sora was still in the BB-style incubator, I imagined Sora disoriented for the first time waking up as a baby, seeing that he was in some kind of incubator, but when he sees the orange crystal, he thinks he has reincarnated in the world of Death Stranding, as one of those weird guides, and while he was moaning, cursing everything that came to mind, Hanako would lift the fabric covering the incubator and Sora would laugh when he saw Musashi, who for him was missing the bandana to be Solid Snake, laughing happily at not ending up in the world of Death Stranding while Hanako put him back to sleep.

Peter Alvarez; is a calm person who has a great reluctance to weapons, most likely due to his past when he worked as an engineer for some corporation, not ending well for Peter, before getting married and having Ainoa as a daughter, Judy's mother, Peter wears circular glasses, hair with quite a few gray hairs for a brunette, to the sides and with a clear forehead.

Ainara Alvarez; The bold and affectionate, Judy's grandmother, Ainara does not give much importance to her appearance, wearing disheveled hair and more comfortable clothes, but that after turning 50 Ainara was an attractive woman who, due to her neglect, hides her features, appearing older than she really is. After becoming friends with Aoi, who always teased her for her neglect, Ainara has been paying more attention to her appearance, which Peter was very pleased with the change and was mentally grateful to Aoi, since he did not dare to say something like that to his wife.

Hiroyuki Hatake; Musashi's younger brother who also worked for Arasaka until he retired after a tragedy. He is 15 years younger than his brother, who he always admired, has black hair and a half mane that he usually ties in a ponytail, he has been assigned to NC to review the complaint about a possible violation of the BlackWall.

That's all. I also just released the first chapter of the story based on the 40k universe, if you can take a look and tell me what you think, it would be great.

The novel is called Reborn in 40k Universe (provisional name).

In the story I will explain everything, and I will not assume that the reader knows about the 40k universe, which i will say is one of the most extensive ones out there, that's why the story is based on it and not in that universe, to have more freedom when writing.