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A small step on Hajime no Ippo

A promising star in box, gets tangled in a fixed up match, he disagrees and the mafia kills him. He starts again in Hajime no Ippo, with a boxing system that helps him to reach his goal. Become a World Champion.

Dini_Jimenez · 漫画同人
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23 Chs

13 - Dream match... Not

I put the gloves away and went to be with Ippo, he was nervous but not that much, by this time Takamura, Kimura and Miyata Senior were near the match.

I still couldn't catch my breath totally, but I was recovering, this body was hard to move, I mean on the last life, I had three full years of training, my body was worked with a great weight, but right now I'm at the starting line, for the memories available, I wasn't the type to train, I could see my flabby belly, also my arms were powerless, one could say that how could I be that weak at 73kg, but I never went to any gym, or train, or even fight, this body was lazy, maybe that's why my family was weirded out, and also they didn't object much.

I still need to recover my old body, I am shorter so I could be at a lower weight class I'm at middle weight but that's Takamura's path, I won't be able to go there, even when he relinquised that belt it's not something I want, I could do better at Lightweight but that was Aoki's, so I'm going to take the spot of Junior Welter, there are also really good boxers at that class, and it's only 11kg that I need to go down, no big deal If I have a year to lose them.

Also I have my system, and I could manage my weight with more ease, or using the items... those two beverages were scary but a 2kg and 3kg it's a lot to take off in only a day, and there was not secondary effects... well Diarrhea but that shit 'pun intended' is affordable.

Something I could see is that my speed is less than my past life, but still I was not a slowpoke.

DING'

Oh damn the match has already begun. I stopped my line of thinking and observed the match.

First Round

Ippo had his guard up, Ichiro was looking at him with a smirk, and was doing a hit and run, the guard that Ippo held was great, the punches didn't even make him flinch, still the future rival started to mix the punches and aim to the body, after a few punches like 4 or 5, Ippo lowered his guard and just like the original plot, he was floored with a hook.

Ippo's ears were ringing a little, still he put his hands to the ring floor and raised his body. Sora shouted to Ippo to try to not lower his guard and also to throw a few punches, to remember the combination the coach just teached him.

Ippo give him a nod and stood up completely, he raised his guard but his left was not in the full position, Ichiro dashed with outstanding speed and threw a cutting jab to ippo, he blocked with his right and threw three fast jabs, but each one was dodged by Miyata, Ippo chased him, and continued to throw jabs but not even one hit him.

Ichiro side stepped and hit him in the body, trying to lower his guard, this interchange continued for a little bit, and Miyata was succesfull he lowered Ippo's guard and twisted his body for a diagonal hook.

BAM!!!!!

One could say that if a picture was taken it could sell, Ippo's right was punching Ichiro, while Ichiro's right also smashed Ippo's head.

"Woaaah an exchange" the people at the gym exclaimed

Time resumed and Ippo threw a left, but Miyata legs faltered.

"Woah He did a down out of Miyata, dude this is amazing, the rookie is amazing!" Another pugil almost shouted.

Ichiro made an angry face and he stood up, not even at the count of three, he raised his guard and looked at Ippo with anger. "No more nice guy" he exclaimed.

DING' the bell sounded, Ichiro went to his corner, but Ippo didn't moved.

"Hey Ippo come one, you have to go a corner" I exclaimed but he didn't move.

I entered the gym and tried to pull him, and he just fell.

"What the hell?" I said out loud. "Ippo?"

He was unconscious.

I... I didn't expected that, I thought that the match would be more like the original, but it didn't even make a round.

Takamura was laughing at Ichiro. "You got floored by a zombie! DAHAHAHHAA"

"Shut up Takamura" Ichiro said annoyed.

Miyata senior was silent but he raised his head and said "Still, the guy is a total newbie and you got hit with a luc... no... You got hit with his Determination!, Ichiro, learn from this bout you just had, there... there may not be lucky punches, that punch was filled with drive and inner strength, and you got overconfident with your skills, the pro ring is even more demanding"

Ichiro scowled a little, but he moved his head "Yes Father!" he exclaimed with confidence.

Meanwhile one of the pugils came with a bucket of water, but Kazeo didn't let them throw it at him, he took Ippo's sneackers and put them as a pillow, he checked if his eyes were moving, or any sign of convultion or concusion. "Ok anyone has alcohol?"

"Yes!, here" another adult came into the picture with the things at hand, Kazeo took them and woke up Ippo.

"What happened?" Ippo said.

I smiled "You got Knocked out, congratulations! your first!"

"I don't remember wha..." he tried to say.

Kazeo hooked his arm with him and raised him, "And you probably won't still that was a good punch, you managed to hit, don't be discouraged even unconscious you hit him, that's amazing in its own way"

The coach came to us and said. "Come tomorrow, no more sparring for you two for a month, and we will try to go to the basics. you kid need to get into shape" he said pointing at me, "And you!, need to train more" he said smiling at Ippo. 

"You're dissmised" he said.

We grabbed our stuff and went to the exit when we heard something.

"Hey big guy!, could you train with me?"

I looked back and Takamura was holding Kazeo's shoulder

O.o 

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Well a short chapter and also just as you read I won't make the same matches, because well, in a match everything is different you can't train different and expect the same, Ippo had more confidence this time, but still he lacked almost 5 weeks of training, also there is going to be a rematch with Miyata, he won't let it end like that!

I hope you enjoyed the chapter, leave a comment, if you liked it, or if you hated it, every critic helps me! Also can someone recommend me a page to check my grammar? I tried grammar check net but I couldn't understand it, maybe I need a Youtube walkthrough.

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