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Author here with mandatory five star review . Here's some things that I feel you should know before you jump in. This is a rewrite, not really important but I'm tossing it outside. There's going to be romance, but not in the early chapters so if you're here for the mushy stuff you're going to have to wait This is also going to cover the MC's personal life, it's not just about football and training, he has a life outside those things. That's all for now 👉🏽👈🏽
I Play Football With A System
Heavenmonarch_
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nvm it's also your works xD so you're decided to rewrite the novel? so what's new on this rewrite version?
Neilyn:wait, i think i already read a football novel with the same name as the MC, you steal others works or something?
Nothing new in the first few chapters. I decided to slow him down a bit. I feel like he broke through to the first team a bit too quickly.
Neilyn:nvm it's also your works xD so you're decided to rewrite the novel? so what's new on this rewrite version?
you didn't change about his attitude ? from what I've remembered, he's quite arrogant even though He's not that good, probably because he have the system, that's what making him arrogant?
Heavenmonarch_:Nothing new in the first few chapters. I decided to slow him down a bit. I feel like he broke through to the first team a bit too quickly.
Neilyn:you didn't change about his attitude ? from what I've remembered, he's quite arrogant even though He's not that good, probably because he have the system, that's what making him arrogant?
I've seen the ones you pointed out. Thank you. I'll proof read the chapters and correct the mistakes right away. Thank you for pointing the mistakes out
Moudassir_Ali:Please correct those mistakes
Heavenmonarch_:I've seen the ones you pointed out. Thank you. I'll proof read the chapters and correct the mistakes right away. Thank you for pointing the mistakes out
Tr0uble_Maker:Could you please pinpoint where are the differences between the old and the current novel, as I don't want to read the novel again
Bro what's your problem with black protagonists? You was in the original version saying the same thing and now you're here. You racist or sth?
Haku_Ouroboros:another N***** protagonist....
Heavenmonarch_:From where he got into the first team. I feel it's a bit rushed so I'm going to slow him down there
Heavenmonarch_:Bro what's your problem with black protagonists? You was in the original version saying the same thing and now you're here. You racist or sth?
Tr0uble_Maker:don't mind him, just be careful with copyright like club's and players names
Heavenmonarch_:Bro what's your problem with black protagonists? You was in the original version saying the same thing and now you're here. You racist or sth?
