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Kamishiro_Andres
Kamishiro_AndresLv31mth
2024-09-17 07:02

It started well, it has a lot of potential if the inserted female OC that ruined the story is removed, in a somewhat brutal way, the story is passable at best, I leave this review if there is someone who likes to read reviews before reading a story so as not to have to waste their time if the story is bad, the story itself is good, except for the forced romance and illogical and forced manipulation of sentimentality that the protagonist should not have, everything is very good, giving it 3 stars is because it has potential or well, it had.

Pokemon Rebirth: Rise of Punit[Not Continued]

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Usually I’m down for an edgy MC however he’s too in his head granted I have only read to chapter 6. But it’s like every other paragraph is him going on and on about how he is scared of everything and it is harder to survive in the world due to it being real life. But after he does that for every single thing he does it is legitimately aggravating when you are genuinely interested in seeing how he will eventually develop not constantly going on and on and not doing anything about it. Especially when it’s alluding that he was an adult, so he needs to grow up. He may have changed later in the story and I do not intend to put down the work itself because I am sure it is a solid piece with great potential, it unfortunately for me did not get to that point soon enough.

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Abhay_Adhikari_6709
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Brother if you can. please check out after getting your Ai done with it's correction. If you yourself read again you can change some stuff that Ai couldn't change. Although Ai can write many chapters there was no creativity in them it will copy from some sources. If this story is your writing then please check it out yourself before releaseing

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Reveal spoiler

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