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Aayush_storms
Aayush_stormsLv42mth
2024-09-10 15:09

Highly recommended to those seeing this review. Today's Pokemon fics in the name of originality don't make a straightforward reincarnation Pokemon adventures but after so long it is finally here on webnovel. Please show this fic some support guys.

Pokemon Rebirth: Rise of Punit[Not Continued]

Vivid_Horizons
2.8
128 Chs

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Vivid_Horizons
Vivid_HorizonsAuthor

"Wow, I really appreciate the shout-out! It's great to hear the story resonates with you. I'm staying true to that classic adventure feel while adding my own spin. Thanks for the support, and I'll make sure the journey only gets better from here!"

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Mohit_0812
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This review and comment right here looks totally scripted and rehearsed, and the reply from the author is also probably done by the Ai

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Vivid_Horizons
Vivid_HorizonsAuthor

yap ,i write the reply with the help of ai, is it a problem?

Mohit_0812:This review and comment right here looks totally scripted and rehearsed, and the reply from the author is also probably done by the Ai
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Nyxio
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Ok, I am sure this is written mostly by AI. Author not understanding English comments also reinforce this. Poor guy doesn’t even know that AI took over his writing when he only asked it to edit.

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H3X
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Usually I’m down for an edgy MC however he’s too in his head granted I have only read to chapter 6. But it’s like every other paragraph is him going on and on about how he is scared of everything and it is harder to survive in the world due to it being real life. But after he does that for every single thing he does it is legitimately aggravating when you are genuinely interested in seeing how he will eventually develop not constantly going on and on and not doing anything about it. Especially when it’s alluding that he was an adult, so he needs to grow up. He may have changed later in the story and I do not intend to put down the work itself because I am sure it is a solid piece with great potential, it unfortunately for me did not get to that point soon enough.

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Abhay_Adhikari_6709
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Seems like a fanfic written by Chat GPT. I have read alot of fanfics written in this style, where there is very little dailougue, and they just describe everything instead. Overall, not impressed![img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

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Kamishiro_Andres
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It started well, it has a lot of potential if the inserted female OC that ruined the story is removed, in a somewhat brutal way, the story is passable at best, I leave this review if there is someone who likes to read reviews before reading a story so as not to have to waste their time if the story is bad, the story itself is good, except for the forced romance and illogical and forced manipulation of sentimentality that the protagonist should not have, everything is very good, giving it 3 stars is because it has potential or well, it had.

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I'm not an expert in writing but it's simply noticeable when someone uses an AI. When you read it, you feel something is wrong, you don't know what it is but something is obviously wrong.

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the moment he interacted with misty i quit reading. it ruined it. too much nonsense. wasted chapters. so disappointing. bye bye bye ... sigh ...

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Danger_Zone_69
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Brother if you can. please check out after getting your Ai done with it's correction. If you yourself read again you can change some stuff that Ai couldn't change. Although Ai can write many chapters there was no creativity in them it will copy from some sources. If this story is your writing then please check it out yourself before releaseing

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Reveal spoiler

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Fito
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Well, normally I like a Pokemon story, but why put the MC on a Pokemon journey with unlimited powers? Doesn't that take away from the character development? Besides, many things are difficult to understand at first.

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