Review Detail of leo_adritz in Sun Sun Fruit In One Piece[ON HIATUS]

Nothing much just the repeated pov changes breaks the pace and stability of readers, still overall good till. Hope u can continue coz all escanor inspired fanfics gets dropped out. There is even one sun power based in onepiece fanfic but the power scaling went absurd levels then dropped. So hope u let the mc develop and don't make smth like sin of pride directly