Review Detail of Zarek8_31_07 in I will finally embark on the road of no return called hero

It's got a decent story premise, but the amount of things wrong with this work could fill an essay. there are multiple breaks in the work that make it very obvious that this was written out using talk to text, chat GPT, and other tools of the like, which isn't inherently bad but it wasn't edited in the slightest and needs a full revision to be even close to grammatically correct in some portions. The character design is the most flagrant of issues in this fanfiction, with all of the characters not acting even remotely how they would in the Type/Moon universe. to be honest this feels more like a Greece mythology fanfiction than a Fate one; other than some basic characters added in, nothing lines up with the Type/Moon universe.