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I came to read Omniscient Reader, stayed for everything else
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it should be the world anchor Rhongomyniad, right?
probably similar to Issei's dad's reaction
'ting'? what exactly are you saying? 'ting' is not a word
i still don't understand the pink hair thing. The only thing in DBZ that I know to be pink is Buu
It's got a decent story premise, but the amount of things wrong with this work could fill an essay. there are multiple breaks in the work that make it very obvious that this was written out using talk to text, chat GPT, and other tools of the like, which isn't inherently bad but it wasn't edited in the slightest and needs a full revision to be even close to grammatically correct in some portions. The character design is the most flagrant of issues in this fanfiction, with all of the characters not acting even remotely how they would in the Type/Moon universe. to be honest this feels more like a Greece mythology fanfiction than a Fate one; other than some basic characters added in, nothing lines up with the Type/Moon universe.
I mean, the MAIN type/moon protagonist is Shirou. Enough said
indeed it is really good
favorite portrayal of mad scientist so far
please for the love of fuck, LEARN TO USE PUNCTUATION. It is downright painful to read blocks of text without quotations where someone is pretty clearly speaking. This is a problem that persists in even the latest chapter (97). Reading is supposed to be enjoyable, but it's really a chore when you have to put brain power into interpreting what is dialogue and what is internal thoughts or what is just narrative description.
Artoria doing better than in canon
personally, i'm loving it. as long as the chapters keep coming and the work isn't dropped, your readers will fully support you
there's a reason Shinji becomes such a good spiritron hacker
feeling less pain after the water was because it increased his tolerance to it, not because it weakened his nerve endings
pain is a bodily function to tell you when to stop doing something, or to alert you when something is wrong. He doesn't adapt to the pain because there is nothing to adapt to.
the levels of foreshadowing hundreds of chapters later on this merciless roast are incredible