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I'll try to be honest with you this novel has a big problem with the beginning you should make the main character have an accident with the VR helmet and because of the accident he became the barbarian otherwise it's just too much at the beginning of the novel. another thing that I think it's bad is the contrast between everyone in the barbarian powers because the way you explain the barbarian is like three four rounds stronger than everyone it's just too much you know and are the possible end of the novel he will be stronger too because the cultivation manual so he will always be invincible.

Conquest of Taboo and Debauchery

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thanks for the valuable review brother