Review Detail of DeadEye12 in Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!

Great potential. Amazing power system, amazing world building, the failure is the authors ability to remember what he or she writes. Multiple times have you ignored powers and abilities you stated he has. I gave up due to the author having the main character lose a fight with only using half of his abilities. The only power he used was his fire power but he also had a martial art, space sense, and teleportation that he didn’t use. The icing on the cake was that the main character was crying he ran out of ideas on how to win but didn’t use any of his powers. Great potential, author should definitely re read his or her own work and ensure continuity makes sense