DeadEye12

Great and unique story! My only issue is the inconsistency in the formatting and translation. It consistently ruins the immersion of the story and makes reading many chapters miserable. Hopefully the author can fix those chapters. Here is one example: (2 sentences) ‘’ “ (Two sentences) “ “ And it will be like this out of no where in the middle of a chapter or for a few chapters. Those chapters feel like scams cause you make us waste our coins for less than half the content of a typical chapter.

Holy crap this is ridiculous

You have a great story but you consistently ruin the immersion

Don’t understand why they go straight for the kill instead of diplomacy. Imagine winning the native species to your side?

I love how it goes from most flying heaven are at stage 5 to most are high stage 6

FUCK! This degree thing is so annoying! Put it back to level

Stop changing shit please, it ruins the immersion

Jesus Christ it’s not hard to put parentheses

You are literally robbing your readers

Tame the beasts